Dialogue

Dialogue

A Poem by Yu Yu
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This came to me one night, when I couldn't get on the net. It accidentally fits the Words Group assignment 1.

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He tells me he's scared
Staring at me.
He asks why I cry
Taking a puff.
He says I'm more impatient now
Pausing. Taking in my actions.

Then I say, are you going to eat that?
Looking at him.
Knowing food would change the subject.

Then I say to myself.
What is he scared of?
Observing him going for the curry.
Then I ask myself,
Why DO I cry?
Noticing him drifting off.
Then I tell myself
I'm impatient for the times we're apart.


© 2008 Yu Yu



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Oh.
Unusual.
Which is good.
Enjoy the times when you're apart you say?
I understand this from outside of the feeling if that makes any sense.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really like the way you string words together. It's very original. The final line is nicely phrased and placed. It leaves the poem with a wonderful final tone.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on February 21, 2008
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Yu Yu
Yu Yu

Kolkata



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