without you my lover

without you my lover

A Poem by zunie frost




Without you my lover 
I have a thousand reasons to die
Millions to cry  
You cut deeper than the knife 
So dark at night
So bright in the sun light 
If I  could just stretch out  my hands
so I could touch the sun light   
Does fire hurt?
Without you my lover 
 One touch wouldn't burn
Are you really here ?
Or is it just me falling into tears ?
Eyes are red with fear 
They said i'm mad 
Because they don't understand 
Without you my lover
Burn, don't hurt
Without you my lover 
I'm cursed
With out you my lover 
I can't live much longer 

© 2016 zunie frost



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zunie frost
enjoy please

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As a melancholic poem it is so nice. But we should not be in such condition because it makes a weak. If someone does not have love or feelings for others, it is his/her right. we should not waste time in thinking and weeping. Faiz Ahmad Faiz composed his famous verses. " Mujhse pahli si muhabbat mere mahboob na maang, Aur bhi gham hai zamane mein muhabbat ke siwa, Rahatein aur bhi hain wasl ki raahat ke siwa."

If someone does have feeling, no matter. there are thousand things that can give the way of life. Thanks for sharing such lovely poem, Zainab. Keep writing. I look forward your other writings


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Szhzia

Posted 12 Months Ago


We are incomplete without the person that we love. You have expressed it very nicely in this poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


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This is a wonderful piece because you captured the longing for a lover. As humans, we all need a lover. Not just a partner or friend but a lover. Thanks for sharing. N.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Awesome! I could actually imagine music in the background while I was reading with utter clarity!
Touching and creatively elegant piece!
Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
This is actually touching

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
The heartache iis present and it feels very raw, and pained.

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks !!!
Good poem. Most people who's in love can relate to this. Relates to deep love, i like it. ^_^

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
how the heart bleeds in this one Zunie, achingly so, nicely portrayed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
The longing for someone. That whenever u picture your life without them you feel dead inside. I know because I'd been so madly in love with someone that I almost thought a single minute without them would destroy me. And people didn't really understand "what we had"
So safe to say I can relate to your poem. That on it's own, being able to connect with your readers is pure talent. Skill that you have and raw potential.
Aphy

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
this is more like it! very crisp clear message being delivered! yes I can relate to this quite literally... well not too literal seeing as how im still alive... lol!

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks for the review !!!
are you in love with someone ?
Johnny

1 Year Ago

perhaps I could be Zunie.. get at me in the inbox messaging to find more about it! ;)

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zunie frost

karachi, muslim, Pakistan



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i am 17 years old ...... When I was 13. I wrote a poem .... More like rhymes for my parents on their birthday ... That when I started writing... I wanna be writer... I love spending my time writing .... more..

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