is love the only thing

is love the only thing

A Poem by zunie frost

If love would be the only thing
I could cry all night, all day
You binded  me in a circle of fears
I never cried nor cared
You kept me thinking 
If love would be the only thing
I could wait for you all day
No matter if it's hot or cold
You would always be a part of my soul
If love would be the only thing
But is love the only thing ?






© 2016 zunie frost



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Amazing....I like the question you asked
"Is love the only thing?"

Very lovely.....keep writing..



Posted 1 Year Ago


Loved reading your poem. I liked the question part. From my POV love is not everything. There are other things which are important as love.
Again loved your poem, thx for sharing. :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


liked the questioning in your poetry:

"But is love the only thing?"

very deeply written. love can only be one thing, perhaps... sometimes, it comes with much priorities of heart that only belong to "faith". well penned!

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
Love is the most valuable thing on this planet yet it is also the most unpredictable great work my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

Oh that's great what is the book's name?
Raylene

1 Year Ago

The law of dragons two chapters are posted now
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

ok i'll read them soon thanks for sharing
Your questions to yourself is so good. I think love is boundless we should leave it on its own way. Nobody can ever get it forcefully because it is like a gentle rain. You cannot get mercy forcefully from anyone in same ways love appears as a gentle rain. If love come to you with its own way let it come otherwise leave it and let it go. the lover has no any right to get it forcefully. we always should keep the self respect at first. You should not beg love from anyone because it is a gift that appears in our hearts as gentle rain. I observe all these in this poem and I like it, Zainab. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thank you so much for the review
good question zunie - love is very important but not just to be poured out on one person - there's so much more to love :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot
Nicely written. Love is so important in our lives but then comes the all important question:
Is love the only thing?

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

Love is an importat part of life but that doesn't mean it's the only thing
nice piece dear... emotions just flow around...liked it very much...
one suggestion is that if u use would instead of could, it sounds better... well it's just a suggestion... overall, lovely poem... and thoughts too..
yours special friend
Anindita

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

thank you so much
Another nice poem and I like the questioning. "Is love the only thing?" Not all the time, sometimes it's one-sided.

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

Yup some time it is one sided and sometimes you got betrayed .... love is complicated but it's not t.. read more
Yes is love the only thing! When all that fuzziness of first love disappears, you are left in love but respecting your partner. yes gone are the days of that euphoria of looking into eyes and your in heaven for ever after.

Posted 1 Year Ago


zunie frost

1 Year Ago

Thanks for all the kind words

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zunie frost
zunie frost

karachi, muslim, Pakistan



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i am 17 years old ...... When I was 13. I wrote a poem .... More like rhymes for my parents on their birthday ... That when I started writing... I wanna be writer... I love spending my time writing .... more..

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