Silver

Silver

A Poem by Zainab UF
"

Dealing with teasing and bullying is harder than I imagined, but I will not give up.

"

I am silver

Killing werewolves who

Feast upon my confidence.

I will avenge.


I am silver

Glowing like the moon

Through mediocre darkness.

I will shine.


I am silver

Anchoring myself

Against the pull of the past.

I will persevere.


I am silver

Retaining lustre

Impervious to corrosion.

I will prevail.

© 2012 Zainab UF


Author's Note

Zainab UF
Note: Silver Hills is the name of my new school, so I thought it would be a nice play on words to use the metal and its uses in reality and fiction as parallels.
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Aww, I definitely think bullying and teasing should be put to a halt too! It's pointless and quite stupid to me! My parents always tells me that the reason people do that is because they're jealous of something you have that they don't. Please listen to that piece of advice, because that's true. :) Keep your head lifted high and the thing that just kills bullies is when you shine your biggest smile even when they throw negativity at you! Try it, it's so fun :D Anyway, this poem's depressing but also a fact of life. Great job, keep up the good work. :)

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Zainab UF

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Ashley, both for the review and the advice! I'll keep it in mind. :)
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, anytime! That's good. Anytime you need any reviews or advice then just simply messag.. read more
I think this is wonderful. Your author's note adds some backstory, but the poem stands just from your intro. I even think it would without it. Your strength comes through in your writing. And, for what it is worth, I am proud of you. You are very talented.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Zainab UF

11 Years Ago

Thank you so, so much for the kind words of encouragement!
Shimmerbliss/CAF

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. :)

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Added on August 6, 2012
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Tags: silver, venting my feelings, new school, bullying

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Zainab UF
Zainab UF

Calicut, Kerala, India



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