Vulture

The vulture looks for carrion after Colorado shooting

Hungry vulture flies

For eating human carrion

Finished tasty feast

Reviews

[Prritiy]

vultures atleast eat the carrion but we the so called Mankind are eating away people, animals, nature alive.

you have summed up the pain in three lines to the mark, its painful even if our people's dead body is eaten away by vultures. The same rather worse is happening in our hills of Uttarakhand which witnesses flash floods. Here in news dogs eating rotten dead bodies and turning violent too.

[zainul]

I am very sorry to know the fate of human in the hills of Uttarakhand.
Yes,we the so called Mankind are eating away people, animals, nature alive.
I can't tolerate so many tragic events in the world.
Just pray that these should be stopped immediately.
Thank you Prritiy for stopping by to add such a precious point in this discussion.

[Prritiy]

You are welcome friend.

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure,lovely friend.:)

[Prritiy]

:) ........

[Aethereal]

This poem inspire me to write this gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Likewise

When a vulture dies
torn and broken on the sand,
he's a tasty prize
for his hungry vulture band.

[zainul]

You are really a great gem,Aethereal!
This is very sweet and meaningful.This is a wonderful prize for me.
I accept this as a gift for me.
May I suggest you to publish all your poems that are written in response to other writes in WC.
I publish such poems in this site and the learned members cordially accept them.

[Loner]

Beautiful portrayal of emotions .... these emotions which have been
penned down in just 3 verses greatly imply too many misfortunes in
the world be it war, crime, injustice etc delightful read indeed ....

[zainul]

Loner,adore you for the admiring review.
We are living in a world where misfortunes affect our lives too frequently.
We are losing our beloved people and lamenting our fates.
Thanks for the compliments and compassionate feeling.

[Loner]

U are more then welcome good writers are hard too
find now a days so why waste time when we find one ....

[zainul]

Thanks for the generous compliments.
I am so fortunate to meet a talented gem here.

[Loner]

I say what i feel so i mean what i say ..... i am just a raw rock among
such a vast community of polished writers around me...

[zainul]

I have written my view in my review on your poem.
I suppose it is the truth for you,talented poetess.
Please have a look.

[Loner]

Awwwh !
that was not needed at all i will have a look at once ....

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Great poem. The Colorado shooting was a terrible misfortune, many of my friends had family who were shot.

[zainul]

Thank you for the admiring review.
We are very unfortunate that innocent people are being murdered frequently.Now here,some time later somewhere else.
What is the end of such cruelty?
I sympathize for the families and friends of the mourning people who
lost their dear ones in Colorado and elsewhere.
Let their souls rest in peace for eternity.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The vulture is an opportunist as are many men but most atrosities are committed by design.

[zainul]

Yea,the same hate in the heart is the culprit.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No misguided fear is often then culprit

[zainul]

I think you can find the actual reason through research.
But,I will insist hate as the most important regulating factor.
You went too far to countries of the Middle East to cite examples.
Could you come back to UK and wonder how hate ripped apart some of your beloved relatives away and made enemies?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No hate is fueled from fear. In addition people are sheep and are willing to be manipulated by the carisma and lies of the powerful

[zainul]

OK