Collusion

Collusion

A Poem by zainul
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Collusion of leaders and vandals has emerged as a serious social malady

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Vandals make fortune

Scandals involve top people

Collusion harms trust


© 2012 zainul


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Ten words and a multitude of meaning - brilliant! Each phrase is the basis of something gigantic, something obnoxious, so, you've set thoughts running, sent this reader off and away to mull over each segment - or, as you put it: each social malady. The second and third lines echo something i recently posted.

Thank you for sharing this cleverly written poem .. it's memorable.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very fortunate today to have two wonderful reviews.
The interpretation you made here .. read more



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precisely the problem with the economy.......and worse things

great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the very illuminating review.
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

yes!
Dont we know it.It seems mans nature to advantage himself at anothers distress.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks,Tate for the great review.
This poem may be short, but it definitely holds much truth! Excellent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the admiring review.
brief and effective, poignant indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the great review,Rene.
Ten words and a multitude of meaning - brilliant! Each phrase is the basis of something gigantic, something obnoxious, so, you've set thoughts running, sent this reader off and away to mull over each segment - or, as you put it: each social malady. The second and third lines echo something i recently posted.

Thank you for sharing this cleverly written poem .. it's memorable.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I feel very fortunate today to have two wonderful reviews.
The interpretation you made here .. read more
This is a good poem... I love the shortness of it ;D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

Your welcome... I only realized now that it was a haiku love it all along
zainul

11 Years Ago

Very nice of you,talented poetess.
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

;D
The script of our past, present and future. Each verse is this way and follows this list I feel line-by-line in a way that perhaps was a subconscious thought or maybe left to the reader's mind to digest individually. Here's what I'm saying I see with the past, present, future idea..

Past: Vandals (in the original sense) best known for being one of the tribes to sack Rome in 455 AD. Those throughout history who have modeled their actions and earned the title ring true here too. "Vandals make fortune"

Present: the scandals line is about the current issue you are addressing (brilliantly so, might I add) "Scandals involve top people"

Future: the harm of trust, the outcome of the current scandalous events... "Collusion harms trust"

You wrote a great poem and maybe didn't even know how much flow and amazing structure it had to it in strange lights! Brilliant for surface value and any any depth that can be gained by the reader and encouraged for exploration by the writer as a format. I'd go on to dissect how each line is a microcosm of this to me, but I run the risk of sounding like I'm lecturing at University. AMAZING WORK in every way, as always!

If I've picked up on an ounce of your depth in these short words it has been an honour.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Alexandria,I bow my head for such vivid and meaningful explanation through your wonderful review.read more
Alexandria Reece

11 Years Ago

-bows my head in return-

Thank you for creating a beautiful format for thought and anot.. read more
zainul

11 Years Ago

I am very grateful for your generosity.
Thank you very much.
Wonderfully penned. Had a wonderful distinct flow about it. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the amazing review.
Your words inspired me immensely.
Very true and you expressed it very well..God bless..Kathie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kathie for your great inspiration.
God bless.
Zainul
Very good Tanka. Vandals and scandals are destroying the government meant to serve its people.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful review,Marie.

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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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