Humankid

Humankid

A Poem by zainul
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A humankid fell into trance

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A humankid was playing in a garden

Her partner was a wonderful peahen

They bounced and chased each other

They acted the role of a lovely mother


The humankid stumbled on a hidden stone

She screamed for pain in the pelvic bone

The peahen was frightened by the accident

She called hummingbird for her treatment


The hummingbird came with first aid box

She hummed mantra with cunning fox

They massaged humankid with great care

Peahen flapped her wings for fresh air


Hearing tumult peacock rushed with peachicks

He gave good advice and showed great tricks

Humankid felt a little comfort by their nursing

Doctor hummingbird then started to sing


The parents of humankid heard the song

They thought something might be wrong

They came with neighbors for her aid

Humankid assured there was no raid


All became happy and started to dance

Humankid felt sleepy and fell into trance





© 2014 zainul



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I love how you portrayed humankind and nature together. Humankind needs nature and nature will be kind to humankind. I love the words used as humankind (an innocent childlike feature) is so connected with nature that her love for them and their love for her is so beautiful written. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

I am once again blessed with an excellent review.
This inspired me a lot.
Thank you Br.. read more



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I love how you portrayed humankind and nature together. Humankind needs nature and nature will be kind to humankind. I love the words used as humankind (an innocent childlike feature) is so connected with nature that her love for them and their love for her is so beautiful written. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

I am once again blessed with an excellent review.
This inspired me a lot.
Thank you Br.. read more
The inter- connection between nature and mankind is amazingly depicted in this tale.They should co- exist,that is divine symbiosis. The message of the poem is beautifully portrayed where the reader is enticed to be hooked in this poem.Your words spell magic- its like the recreation.Nice write.

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

I don't know how to reciprocate your enlightening review.
I am really very impressed and pleas.. read more
Sophy Freebirds

3 Years Ago

You earned the appreciation :) you are welcome muchly
zainul

3 Years Ago

My pleasure,dear friend.:)
The way you have woven the given topics into this work is interesting. The piece has a quirky, personal quality with a multitude of meanings.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for stopping by to grace this piece.
I am very glad to read your heartfe.. read more
Love the personification of humankind here, makes humanity seem more childish and innocent. I love the message you've conveyed here- in order to stay healthy, nature and humankind must work together. Another beautiful write with a solid message

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ally for taking time to read and review the piece too.
I feel very honored and fortu.. read more
Clever story telling and imagery, if only.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much,dear poet:)
I love that you bestowed human traits to the animals - this is a playful poem and it paints a vivid picture- I enjoyed reading it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Audrie for the admiring review.
I am very glad to know that you enjoyed reading it.
Brilliant! This is great writing in the making! Outstanding achievement in getting a wonderful message through to the reader. I really enjoyed reading this marvelous poem...it was such a delight!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you WindSong for the admiring review and wonderful compliments.
This means a world to me.. read more
All those rhyming couplets were a delight to read. The solution to many of the problems related to human coexistence may be found through a careful observation of how our Earth’s biosphere achieves a give-and-take balance among all of its plants and animals. Everything is interconnected. Your poem showed a euphemistic interconnection with all the animals that the “humankid” encountered. Mantra's help to bring about a tranquil frame of mind for both animals and humankind.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Amazing piece with mind blowing message.
Thank you Aethereal for the lovely gift.
I am v.. read more
Aethereal

3 Years Ago

You're welcome! Nature speaks to us in non-verbal ways. It has a language of its own.
zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you again.Yes,nature speaks to us in non-verbal ways and it has a language of its own.
That was very greatly done, well done :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.:)
That was very greatly done, well done :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Tags: humankid, peahen, first aid box, hummingbird, garden, mother, accident, fox, peacock, peachicks, trance

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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