Humankid

A humankid fell into trance

A humankid was playing in a garden

Her partner was a wonderful peahen

They bounced and chased each other

They acted the role of a lovely mother

The humankid stumbled on a hidden stone

She screamed for pain in the pelvic bone

The peahen was frightened by the accident

She called hummingbird for her treatment

The hummingbird came with first aid box

She hummed mantra with cunning fox

They massaged humankid with great care

Peahen flapped her wings for fresh air

Hearing tumult peacock rushed with peachicks

He gave good advice and showed great tricks

Humankid felt a little comfort by their nursing

Doctor hummingbird then started to sing

The parents of humankid heard the song

They thought something might be wrong

They came with neighbors for her aid

Humankid assured there was no raid

All became happy and started to dance

Humankid felt sleepy and fell into trance

Reviews

[Brittanie Bardwell]

I love how you portrayed humankind and nature together. Humankind needs nature and nature will be kind to humankind. I love the words used as humankind (an innocent childlike feature) is so connected with nature that her love for them and their love for her is so beautiful written. Great job!

[zainul]

I am once again blessed with an excellent review.
This inspired me a lot.
Thank you Brittanie for the favour.

[Carola]

a bright & happy ending poem of a child & animals coming together, it reminds me of 'alice in wonderland'.
a nice & interesting write zainul.
cheerio carola

[zainul]

I am very happy to have your amazing review.
I wanted to entertain the children through this write.
I am very grateful to you for remembering the classical work,'Alice in Wonderland' while reading this piece.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Sophy Freebirds]

The inter- connection between nature and mankind is amazingly depicted in this tale.They should co- exist,that is divine symbiosis. The message of the poem is beautifully portrayed where the reader is enticed to be hooked in this poem.Your words spell magic- its like the recreation.Nice write.

~Sophy

[zainul]

I don't know how to reciprocate your enlightening review.
I am really very impressed and pleased by your heartfelt words.
Thank you Sophie.
Thank you very much.

[Sophy Freebirds]

You earned the appreciation :) you are welcome muchly

[zainul]

My pleasure,dear friend.:)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The way you have woven the given topics into this work is interesting. The piece has a quirky, personal quality with a multitude of meanings.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for stopping by to grace this piece.
I am very glad to read your heartfelt review.
I feel very inspired by your lovely compliments.

[Ally Monique]

Love the personification of humankind here, makes humanity seem more childish and innocent. I love the message you've conveyed here- in order to stay healthy, nature and humankind must work together. Another beautiful write with a solid message

[zainul]

Thank you Ally for taking time to read and review the piece too.
I feel very honored and fortunate by your inspiring words.
Have a nice day!

[paul sal.....]

Clever story telling and imagery, if only.....

[zainul]

Thank you very much,dear poet:)

[audrie]

I love that you bestowed human traits to the animals - this is a playful poem and it paints a vivid picture- I enjoyed reading it!

[zainul]

Thank you Audrie for the admiring review.
I am very glad to know that you enjoyed reading it.

[WindSong]

Brilliant! This is great writing in the making! Outstanding achievement in getting a wonderful message through to the reader. I really enjoyed reading this marvelous poem...it was such a delight!

[zainul]

Thank you WindSong for the admiring review and wonderful compliments.
This means a world to me.

[Aethereal]

All those rhyming couplets were a delight to read. The solution to many of the problems related to human coexistence may be found through a careful observation of how our Earth’s biosphere achieves a give-and-take balance among all of its plants and animals. Everything is interconnected. Your poem showed a euphemistic interconnection with all the animals that the “humankid” encountered. Mantra's help to bring about a tranquil frame of mind for both animals and humankind.

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend for the admiring review.
I always appreciate your gift of four lines verse for a poetic work.
I hope you will be kind enough to compose one for "humankid".
Thank you for glorifying the work.

[Aethereal]

Here’s a tiny gift poem for you that shows how a relationship with Nature may result in something good.

Green Moss Points North

Child lost in the wood
walks north as he should
using moss that could
show him where he stood.

[zainul]

Amazing piece with mind blowing message.
Thank you Aethereal for the lovely gift.
I am very glad to read the precious verse.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! Nature speaks to us in non-verbal ways. It has a language of its own.

[zainul]

Thank you again.Yes,nature speaks to us in non-verbal ways and it has a language of its own.

[stars are far]

That was very greatly done, well done :)

[zainul]

Thanks a lot.:)