Humankid

Humankid

A Poem by zainul
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A humankid fell into trance

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A humankid was playing in a garden

Her partner was a wonderful peahen

They bounced and chased each other

They acted the role of a lovely mother


The humankid stumbled on a hidden stone

She screamed for pain in the pelvic bone

The peahen was frightened by the accident

She called hummingbird for her treatment


The hummingbird came with first aid box

She hummed mantra with cunning fox

They massaged humankid with great care

Peahen flapped her wings for fresh air


Hearing tumult peacock rushed with peachicks

He gave good advice and showed great tricks

Humankid felt a little comfort by their nursing

Doctor hummingbird then started to sing


The parents of humankid heard the song

They thought something might be wrong

They came with neighbors for her aid

Humankid assured there was no raid


All became happy and started to dance

Humankid felt sleepy and fell into trance





© 2014 zainul



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I love how you portrayed humankind and nature together. Humankind needs nature and nature will be kind to humankind. I love the words used as humankind (an innocent childlike feature) is so connected with nature that her love for them and their love for her is so beautiful written. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

1 Year Ago

I am once again blessed with an excellent review.
This inspired me a lot.
Thank you Br.. read more



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It felt like a lovely tale of the beginning of the world, like a porquoi tale. It's a very sweet poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Anne for enlightening and inspiring me with your sagacious words.
This is a world to.. read more
This is such a nice story. I take it at face value, friendship between a child and animals, but you probably have a deeper meaning.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Marie for the insightful review.
I am very pleased that you have taken its face valu.. read more
Interesting concept. I did not quickly grasp it initially but now I do and I'm blown-away. If we can all find a way to live together in peace and harmony,life would be much easier. Great lesson. I'm glad I stumbled upon this really inspiring poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Master K-tops for stopping by to glorify this piece.
This means a world to me.
Coexistence huh?? What a wonderful world it would be if we all lived in harmony. No wild or domestic things... All a one happy living.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend for the lovely review.:)
Extremely beautiful poem so very good

Posted 3 Years Ago


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zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jawdat for the admiring review.:)
i agree with coyote...finding one with nature, if we ever can do that...we will all dance, animals, nature and humans alike.

nicely penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear Jacob for the great contribution.
Let's pray for such a great moment for dancin.. read more
A beautiful poem. I like when nature and man can find peace in their kindness. I like the want to assist and the song to bring help. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

I am very pleased to read your admiring review.
Thank you for the generous compliments.
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Awww my sweet friend .This is truly a beautiful and descriptive poem. I could see everything in my mind by your vivid details. Awesome as ever my dear Mr Zainul :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

My pleasure dear friend.
Together we can make the world habitable for our children.
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

I believe this too ................:)
zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your great gesture,dear friend.:)

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Tags: humankid, peahen, first aid box, hummingbird, garden, mother, accident, fox, peacock, peachicks, trance

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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