Magnolia

Magnolia

A Poem by zainul
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Written in Room # 3014 of Hotel Annapurna of Nepal.Dedicated to my friend Dr.Vinod Pandit.

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Thank you magnolia for greeting again
Your flowers smile like white fairies
Your leaves emit tunes like rain
And flower buds sing like geese

I can feel your love,o magnolia
You bring joy in my heart
You remind me of my nostalgia
And invite me to admire art

But,I don't know your passion
Your history ,love pain or pleasure
I am amazed by your fashion
That always brings me precious treasure

I love your greetings in the morning
Magnolia,thank you for every thing

© 2017 zainul



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And I Thank You Zainul,
For bringing out the essence of the sweet aroma of your Soul.
You are always such a pleasure to read.
Whatever the subject you pour your Spirit over it abundantly.
You have a way of Blessing everything with pure dedicated Love.
You always bring me showers of joyful tears whether you are standing up for injustice and smiting the wicked deeds of the world or whether your heart is overflowing with abundant appreciation for Life's Beauty and treasures.
Your Heart is a storehouse of Love, Surely it is a Temple and I know God Lives there.
I always want to read everything you write. I know I will find Gods Love thru your words.

For me it's not what you write that I appreciate so much. I could easily sit like a child at your feet and be locked into every word you say.
I could sit beside you as a Peer and Discuss with you.
I could lie beside you under the clouds of the day and just listen or walk under the moonlight hand in hand and contemplate The world around us.

What an amazing Beautiful Soul you are Zainul.
I only wish you wrote more.
Your Friend and Sister,
Just me :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Eternal Peace and Love,Dear Friend :-)
zainul

3 Years Ago

Eternal Peace and Love,Dear Friend :-)
Cryingkate

3 Years Ago

I shall treasure them words and guard them in my hearts treasure chest for I know their value and ma.. read more



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It has been too cold here for the year to ever enjoy the flowers But i envy that of you

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing the honest feeling.
You need not be envious.
The world is now a small.. read more
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

you are welcome
zainul

3 Years Ago

My pleasure,dear friend.:)
I love the comparisons you've made i this poem, it's so unique and refreshing
Lovely read
Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

I am very pleased by your wonderful review.
It has made my day.
Thank you Ally for stopp.. read more
Ally Monique

3 Years Ago

My pleasure! ^^
There is such beauty here in your expression, Zainul. I look forward to reading more!


My best,
Kelly

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

I feel very honored by your inspiring words,Kelly.
You are always welcome to my little world o.. read more
Lovely poem. All the images transported me to a serene place. I also ponder many things when I look up at trees. Beautiful poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jennifer for sharing your wonderful feelings upon reading the piece on magnolia.I love to .. read more
JenniferMarie

3 Years Ago

You're welcome. I just love magnolia trees :) truly beautiful write.
zainul

3 Years Ago

I am very glad to know that you love magnolia trees.
They are my real passion for many many ye.. read more
The magnolia blossom...so fragrant and quite beautiful. You have made her almost human here in this ode to the magnolia, Zainul! Very romantic and filled with lovely images. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia for stopping by to grace this ode to the magnolia.
I feel very blessed by your.. read more
A collection of beautiful sentiments honoring one who is assuredly most deserving of the praise! Your heartfelt thank you is lovely!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Sheila for stopping by to grace this piece.
I feel very honored too by your wonderfu.. read more
Wow, this makes me appreciate even more the lovely Magnolia tree in our back yard.
Your description of the flowers being like 'white fairies' is PERFECT my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank poetdoug for the encouraging review.
I feel very honored by your compliments.
THisis a lovely poem. Maagnolias are wonderful flowers...their white, pure petals and sweet smell. I had a magnolia bush once, and I wish I still had one to greet me in the morning.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Marie for the lovely contribution.
This was a great experience for me in Nepal.
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Beautiful. All I can say.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jon for the wonderful review.
This is sweet -- I love magnolia trees, too. I really like the imagery in the first stanza. I think the 2nd stanza needs some work, though. Reminding you of nostalgia seems a little redundant, and the term "art" is rather vague. I feel similarly about the 3rd stanza. I think you may have started out with an awesome idea and then been constricted by the rhyme scheme. You might try writing this as a straight letter to the magnolia tree, and then tailoring the letter into a poem that feels right to you -- you might discover some other winning images!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the great contribution.
I tried to focus on beauty of natural things during tra.. read more

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Tags: magnolia, nostalgia, Hotel Annapurna, Nepal, Dr.Vinod Pandit

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