Stop

Stop killing innocent people
Confess your crime against humanity
We hate killers like you
You are condemned for insanity

Stop raping any woman
You ugly beast of hell
Wrath of God will burn you
Hear the angry sound of bell

Stop adding poison with food
You greedy evil trader
You are also a heinous killer
Wait to be tried as a raider

Stop torturing any person
Leave with your deadly weapons
People will not spare any tyrant
They will punish rogues and  pawns

Stop your  savage atrocity
Stop crime against humanity

Author's Note

You may easily understand the reason of my anger

Reviews

[Yasmin]

Your anger makes me wonder of how much you know about politics or the person you are writing this poem about... Stopping something as hurtful and unfair as the situation you have described will take more than one voice and more than words ( not under estimating the power of words)...
This is well written though I wished it was longer with more scenes of injustice
It has been very long since I last read you something and I cant wait to read more

[zainul]

Dear Yasmin,
Thank you for the excellent review.
I feel very inspired by your amazing review.
I will consider adding more scenes of injustice.
Best regards,
Zainul

[Yasmin]

It is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful the way it is but that was the only idea racing my mind that your rage deserves more energy of you
Please enlighten me with a visit of my profile

[zainul]

Thanks for the compliments.
I will review your work tonight.
Have a nice time.

[Blue Bella]

A world full of anxiety and agony that scorched the humanity.. Awakening thoughts that should be read by individual.. extremely wonderful piece.. ^-^

[zainul]

Thank you May for stopping by to awake the conscience of people by your wonderful review.
This inspired me immensely.
Have a nice time.^-^

[Blue Bella]

you're welcome.. :)

[zainul]

My pleasure.. :)

[sakshi arora]

a yell from the heart with a straight messagei hope people actually introspect aftr reading this sir

[zainul]

I am very glad to read your wonderful review,Sakshi.
Thank you for taking time to read and review the piece.

[sakshi arora]

ur welcome :)

[zainul]

My pleasure,dear friend.:)

[Norah]

Wonderful; this poem is filled with passion. I can feel how angry you are through the powerful usage of your words...I really loved it. Great job Zainul

[zainul]

Thank you Norah for stopping by to grace this piece.
I am immensely inspired by your heartfelt comments.

[Norah]

It was my pleasure to read it :)

[zainul]

My pleasure was getting a poet from Lebanon who understands poem.:)

[Marie]

THere are many reasons for your anger. I read about them every day. I fear the crimes against humanity will not stop, because people are violent by nature. I only hope that the violence can be curbed into productivity.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for suggesting a nice solution of violence.
I am very glad that you are aware of the grave situation of crimes against humanity.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, if only it were as easy as telling them to stop, Zainul! Your anger comes through loud and clear in this one. Lydi**

[zainul]

You are right.It is not as easy as telling them.
You and all poets need to join and raise their voices.
Thank you for inspiring review.

[Aethereal]

Humanity is an abstraction since we are really seven billion individuals each with their own definition of truth and justice. All over the world, hot headed angry birds of a feather flock together in groups that war on each other with weapons of mass destruction in an attempt to bring about the dominance of their contrary definitions. Gödel’s Incompleteness Theorem guarantees that we shall never find agreement. The only thing that shall save our species from extinction is that we renounce violence of all kinds, but that won’t happen. Pandemonium rules as the body count rises! An appeal to God is of no use since there seems to be seven billion contrary definitions of “God” . Babble flows from our Tower of Babel.

[zainul]

Thank you Aethereal for bringing Gödel’s Incompleteness Theorem and God side by side.
I am really amazed by your interpretation.I would love to know how the matter is explained further.
Thank you for the great contribution.

[Aethereal]

We’re aware of each other’s definitions of “God”, but no one is aware of “God”. If we were really aware of “God”, there would be peace among us. Definition is our Tower of Babel. “God” is a rose in the wilderness.

[zainul]

Thank you beloved poet.
Every time I am blessed with your 4 -line poem.
Why should I will not get one now?
Please present your 4- line gift.

[Aethereal]

I’ll write a gift poem of eight lines for you today:


Monster Within

A tyrannosaur
stomping through each brain
is the cause of war,
and he shall remain.

Hear his deafening roar
driving us insane
as he feeds on gore
from all those we‘ve slain.

[zainul]

Superb gift from the brilliant poet.
I am happy to have the double strength of poetic gift.

[Sophy Freebirds]

"Stop" - the torture against human race. The whole poem is a wake up call for all of us.We need to stop condoning the cruelty and its time we muster courage to stand up and fight for justice.But with the greedy wolves clad in sheep's clothing it will be difficult to do it against them.A very powerful piece.

~Sophy

[zainul]

Dear Sophy,
Your wonderful review adds value to my work.
Yes,it is true that the greedy wolves clad in sheep's clothing will make things difficult. Yet,your vow to muster courage to stand up and fight for justice is a great inspiration for us all
Thank you for expressing your solidarity so strongly.
~Zainul

[Sophy Freebirds]

Your work is great.I am gonna fight till the end.Sticks and stones are never gonna break my faith.:) it was a pleasure on my part.

[zainul]

I am very pleased to learn your heartfelt determination.

[Cryingkate]

The Anger is normal for persons of conscious. However those of unconsciousness only feed on the anger.
I often have to force myself to remember to repeat " It is well with my Soul"
There are persons of light and those of darkness. Where there is light there can be no darkness.

The Light of Love is the greatest weapon. I know you know this ,for I have always found you filled with the light of love. Be well with your soul my brother.
I know the bitter taste of anger too. but we must be brave and courageous and have faith that Love with heal all. and what love doesn't heal we know with a knowing that the scale of justice with measure fairly very soon the weights of accountability.
Hold on Brother !

[zainul]

Thank you my beloved Sister for emitting light and hope in such state of pain and sufferingsI totally agree with you that we must be brave and courageous and have faith that Love with heal all.
Thanks for expressing solidarity.

[Cryingkate]

I Thank You For sharing your solidarity of Love and respected anger against the evil.
I thank you for sharing the tears of sorrow for those who suffer more then the others.
Your expression is like a sit together on a porch and sharing compassion for the sorrowful and I thank you for all the light and Love you are. And I thank you for this moment to return some of the light and hope that I have stored away that you have given me.
Be Well ...

[zainul]

I am very grateful my beloved Sister for your inspiring words.
God bless you!

[Cryingkate]

:-) ((((HUGS))))

[Tate Morgan]

Crimes against humanity are all around the world nowadays I dont which is worse the crimes against men or the one perpetrated on women

[zainul]

Thank you Tate for stopping by and expressing your solidarity.

[Tate Morgan]

Your welcome my friend

[Bumble]

Very lovely read! It was filled with passion and anger. I enjoyed it through and through.

[zainul]

Thank you Bumble for the compliments and expressing solidarity.