Stop

Stop

A Poem by zainul
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Stop crime against humanity

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Stop killing innocent people
Confess your crime against humanity
We hate killers like you
You are condemned for insanity

Stop raping any woman
You ugly beast of hell
Wrath of God will burn you
Hear the angry sound of bell

Stop adding poison with food
You greedy evil trader
You are also a heinous killer
Wait to be tried as a raider

Stop torturing any person
Leave with your deadly weapons
People will not spare any tyrant
They will punish rogues and  pawns

Stop your  savage atrocity
Stop crime against humanity


© 2014 zainul



Author's Note

zainul
You may easily understand the reason of my anger

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Your anger makes me wonder of how much you know about politics or the person you are writing this poem about... Stopping something as hurtful and unfair as the situation you have described will take more than one voice and more than words ( not under estimating the power of words)...
This is well written though I wished it was longer with more scenes of injustice
It has been very long since I last read you something and I cant wait to read more


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Yasmin

3 Years Ago

It is a pleasure to read your writes whether you take my advice or you dont your work is wonderful t.. read more
zainul

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliments.
I will review your work tonight.
Have a nice time.


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A world full of anxiety and agony that scorched the humanity.. Awakening thoughts that should be read by individual.. extremely wonderful piece.. ^-^

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you May for stopping by to awake the conscience of people by your wonderful review.
Thi.. read more
Blue Bella

3 Years Ago

you're welcome.. :)
zainul

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.. :)
a yell from the heart with a straight messagei hope people actually introspect aftr reading this sir

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

I am very glad to read your wonderful review,Sakshi.
Thank you for taking time to read and rev.. read more
sakshi arora

3 Years Ago

ur welcome :)
zainul

3 Years Ago

My pleasure,dear friend.:)
Wonderful; this poem is filled with passion. I can feel how angry you are through the powerful usage of your words...I really loved it. Great job Zainul

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Norah for stopping by to grace this piece.
I am immensely inspired by your heartfelt.. read more
Norah

3 Years Ago

It was my pleasure to read it :)
zainul

3 Years Ago

My pleasure was getting a poet from Lebanon who understands poem.:)
THere are many reasons for your anger. I read about them every day. I fear the crimes against humanity will not stop, because people are violent by nature. I only hope that the violence can be curbed into productivity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Marie for suggesting a nice solution of violence.
I am very glad that you are aware .. read more
Oh, if only it were as easy as telling them to stop, Zainul! Your anger comes through loud and clear in this one. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

You are right.It is not as easy as telling them.
You and all poets need to join and raise thei.. read more
Humanity is an abstraction since we are really seven billion individuals each with their own definition of truth and justice. All over the world, hot headed angry birds of a feather flock together in groups that war on each other with weapons of mass destruction in an attempt to bring about the dominance of their contrary definitions. Gödel’s Incompleteness Theorem guarantees that we shall never find agreement. The only thing that shall save our species from extinction is that we renounce violence of all kinds, but that won’t happen. Pandemonium rules as the body count rises! An appeal to God is of no use since there seems to be seven billion contrary definitions of “God” . Babble flows from our Tower of Babel.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you beloved poet.
Every time I am blessed with your 4 -line poem.
Why should I wil.. read more
Aethereal

3 Years Ago

I’ll write a gift poem of eight lines for you today:


Monster Within
.. read more
zainul

3 Years Ago

Superb gift from the brilliant poet.
I am happy to have the double strength of poetic gift.
"Stop" - the torture against human race. The whole poem is a wake up call for all of us.We need to stop condoning the cruelty and its time we muster courage to stand up and fight for justice.But with the greedy wolves clad in sheep's clothing it will be difficult to do it against them.A very powerful piece.

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Dear Sophy,
Your wonderful review adds value to my work.
Yes,it is true that the greedy .. read more
Sophy Freebirds

3 Years Ago

Your work is great.I am gonna fight till the end.Sticks and stones are never gonna break my faith.:).. read more
zainul

3 Years Ago

I am very pleased to learn your heartfelt determination.
The Anger is normal for persons of conscious. However those of unconsciousness only feed on the anger.
I often have to force myself to remember to repeat " It is well with my Soul"
There are persons of light and those of darkness. Where there is light there can be no darkness.

The Light of Love is the greatest weapon. I know you know this ,for I have always found you filled with the light of love. Be well with your soul my brother.
I know the bitter taste of anger too. but we must be brave and courageous and have faith that Love with heal all. and what love doesn't heal we know with a knowing that the scale of justice with measure fairly very soon the weights of accountability.
Hold on Brother !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

3 Years Ago

I Thank You For sharing your solidarity of Love and respected anger against the evil.
I thank .. read more
zainul

3 Years Ago

I am very grateful my beloved Sister for your inspiring words.
God bless you!
Cryingkate

3 Years Ago

:-) ((((HUGS))))
Crimes against humanity are all around the world nowadays I dont which is worse the crimes against men or the one perpetrated on women

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Tate for stopping by and expressing your solidarity.
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

Your welcome my friend
Very lovely read! It was filled with passion and anger. I enjoyed it through and through.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Bumble for the compliments and expressing solidarity.

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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