The Rose

The Rose

A Poem by zainul
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An angel may be too near of an amorous person. But she may be far away for him to approach her.

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A morning bird beckoned me here,
To meet  my angel longing to share.
I felt too shy to gaze at her face,
What charm is there,I can't trace.

I saw the soft lips with very light hue,

What magic is hidden there,nobody knew.
I craved to touch the wonderful lips,
The bird stopped me to offer some tips.

I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,

I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.
I craved to move my fingers over the gems,
The bird stopped me to offer  other games.

I looked at the thin pink-colored ear.

It was so lovely with the simple gear!
I stooped to see the type of the pierce,
The bird stopped me,it looked fierce!

I switched my vision to the  golden fleece,

That covered the head of my lovely bliss.
I moved to examine the sparkle of the hair,
The bird stopped me saying  it would not be fair.

With broken heart, I looked at her nose,

I saw with pleasure, it bloomed like a rose!
I opted to get closer  and take some smell,
The bird happily sang and wagged its tail.

© 2012 zainul


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this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by .. read more
Saddam

10 Years Ago

absolutely my pleasure dear poet.



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this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by .. read more
Saddam

10 Years Ago

absolutely my pleasure dear poet.
Very nice poem and great use of rhyme scheme. Lovely indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.
aha such a lovely poem of love, the lady is really lucky to have so creative and loving companion.

liked it a lot :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

This is a wonderful partnership.
Both of us enjoy the warmth of good gestures.
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

:)
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

:)
A very light touching piece. Its charm gave me a small lift this morning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Smith for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a wo.. read more
Its a very unique poem. I really like the choice of words to describe each detail and the vision you have given to the reader. Its truly amazing. For a writer like me who has so much yet to grasp in poetry, you come as an inspiration. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Hi Zoya,
It is my pleasure that you have reviewed this piece so positively.
While writin.. read more
Wow. This was beautiful.
Going into my favourites! Wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Hello Sye,
How do you do.
I am sorry that I am very late in responding to your lovely co.. read more
There is a playfulness in your word choice that makes the reader smile. I was glad that your Rose felt and is different than the common ones.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

I am very happy for your admiring review.
I appreciate you for your kind compliments.
beautiful! seems you notice every little detail of your Rose...even so seems somehow funny nd like word games in a good way...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Nina for the attentive reading of the poem and inspiring review.
The flow is smooth amd their is stunning details in this piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the inspiring review.
This one made it into my favorites! Just lovely, absolutely lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you ,Allie.It is my pleasure that you have made the poem your favorite.
I thank you fo.. read more

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Added on June 22, 2012
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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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