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WILL I EVER BE THE SAME AGAIN?

WILL I EVER BE THE SAME AGAIN?

A Poem by zaisham9393

  WILL I EVER BE THE SAME AGAIN?



I can hear everyone

But when I try to speak

No one can hear me

Life seems lifeless and bleak

No one can see me

I need to know

Will i ever let it go?

Will I ever be the same again?

Cause I need to breathe again.

 

Nothing is going according to plan

Now I am lost somewhere

I can't even trust myself

Living the same moment again

Like I am frozen

Searching for an answer

All I want to know is

Will I ever be the same again?

Cause I need to feel alive again.

 

So numb…so lost

Searching for a purpose

I want to break, to feel the pain

I want to heal, so I can trust again

Picking up the broken pieces

I need a sign to let me know

Will i ever let it go?

Will I ever be the same again?

Cause I got nothing to lose, but much to gain.

 

 

 

 

 


© 2016 zaisham9393



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Hopelessness is a feeling all of us experience experience. The way you deal with it, makes you different. It can make you a aggressive, submossive or the best, it can make you creative. Imaginative.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

I think you are right. At the end it's all about how you deal with it.
Thank You Penny ;))
Penny

2 Years Ago

You are welcome..
A dark and disturbing place to be, that. Important, nonetheless to rediscover and optimize oneself to keep growing and moving forward and then at times stopping to admire the achievements. :)
I liked this piece. :)






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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much ;)))!!
I don't know much about poetry, but I did like this piece. I know people who have faced deep personal loss and I must say this accurately depicts what they go through.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

thank you so much :) It means a lot to me :)
This reads like a testament to great personal loss. The protagonist has lost their world and is now outside of life. A nice study in the immediacy of grief, before the 'pain' sets in.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for reading and the review ::))))
I've been asking myself the same questions and have not found it yet, well that's why we are here for, aren't we? nice poem loved it :)

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Yes, I do hope so..Thank You :))
A victim's littany - fills the silence of their soul...

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review.I really appreciate it :)
It shows a very ugly feeling through very beautiful words. Well done. :-)

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

it's more like trying to find yourself again, because until you don't realize that something is wron.. read more
Lady Lola

2 Years Ago

I probably oversimplified; I was mostly playing with the juxtaposition of the words 'ugly' and 'beau.. read more
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Gee
A dark place to be,look for the light at the end of the tunnel and keep walking.nice Zaisham

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You :)!!
This sounds to me like being in a world of depression where you're lost but no one knows your there! A lovely piece!

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much andrew :))
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MEW
i liked ur way of picturing the eagerness of a heart longing for a change through simple words...

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You ;)!

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