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EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

A Poem by zaisham9393

EVERY NIGHT OF

...EVERYDAY...

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Every night of everyday

I wake up feeling the same way

I feel so broken

Give me a sign, I've lost my direction

 

 I don’t want to be an empty soul

Without an ambition; with no goal

 I need to find a way

To get through this day

 

I’m running out of words

And you are running out of patience

I just want you to know

 that I love you


So hold my hand and let me know

You won't ever let go

cause I'm hanging by a thread

Between Life and Death



with million question my mind

I can see, but I am blind

I need the strength to carry on

Until all this darkness is gone

 

So be my light in the dark

Cause you have that spark

I can't change reality

So today only you can save me

 

I am scared, but I don't want to be

Please don’t hurt me

Please don’t leave me

It’s getting too dark to see

 

Remember when you told me

You would always be there for me

I trust you so don't leave me

Cause this love is priceless,  but it sets us free.



© 2016 zaisham9393



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All people will struggle.
"Please don’t ever leave me
I am scared; it’s too dark to see
Just stay with me
Until the day, death sets me free."
All of us need a kind word and a friendly face near. Hard to find purpose to go forward. But we must. I liked the honest and thoughts and struggled described leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Wow! That was fully charged of emotional energy! Coincidentally, I heard a Pink song today on the radio that has a similar 'stay with me' tone. An enjoyable read. :)

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review ;)!!!!!!!!!
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dan
Yet another tale of angst and tension wrapped around a guy and a death wish, take your pick. I will keep reading your writes of pain and anguish, continue giving you well-deserved great reviews for great writing, and wishing for the day when Zaisha writes a tale of successful and fruitful love enveloped by happiness. (Write what you wish, Zaisha, my wishes are many in life but I am, after all, a realist) take care...dan

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for reading and the sweetest review dan :))).
Beautiful! Very moving, my Dear. Between life and death, how powerful......heartfelt...Kyam

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank YOu :))!
Shadows seem more potent when life grounds us, a heartfelt write that shows such reflection, blessings...

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :)!!!!!!!!
I really liked this one!!
Keep it up!

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))!
I really thought the poem would be a sunshine feel poem like the picture you posted haha. I really enjoyed it. I'm impressed.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Glad you liked it :))...........Thank You dearest Edis :)))!
Sometimes that small flicker can carry us far Zaisha.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You David for the review ;)!
Your struggle with a person
seems like you are light
and he is so dark
you answered all your questions

you wish for a way
he wishes for an excuse

its all there

set yourself free


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AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA

2 Years Ago

JUST AWESOME....
Lingering Soul

2 Years Ago

isn't she
simply awesome
zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you Nisreena :))....and Akshayavata :))
Wow! This is beautiful. I love the flow of it, the frustration is shown here. They contemplation between giving up and holding on is strong. Thanks for sharing

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much Tamika ;)
A really good write , a little editing could make it great.
Thank you for sharing .
-Angad. Cheers!!

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You :)))!
Angad Waraich

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome.

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