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EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

A Poem by zaisham9393

EVERY NIGHT OF

...EVERYDAY...

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Every night of everyday

I wake up feeling the same way

I feel so broken

Give me a sign, I've lost my direction

 

 I don’t want to be an empty soul

Without an ambition; with no goal

 I need to find a way

To get through this day

 

I’m running out of words

And you are running out of patience

I just want you to know

 that I love you


So hold my hand and let me know

You won't ever let go

cause I'm hanging by a thread

Between Life and Death



with million question my mind

I can see, but I am blind

I need the strength to carry on

Until all this darkness is gone

 

So be my light in the dark

Cause you have that spark

I can't change reality

So today only you can save me

 

I am scared, but I don't want to be

Please don’t hurt me

Please don’t leave me

It’s getting too dark to see

 

Remember when you told me

You would always be there for me

I trust you so don't leave me

Cause this love is priceless,  but it sets us free.



© 2016 zaisham9393



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All people will struggle.
"Please don’t ever leave me
I am scared; it’s too dark to see
Just stay with me
Until the day, death sets me free."
All of us need a kind word and a friendly face near. Hard to find purpose to go forward. But we must. I liked the honest and thoughts and struggled described leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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an epic poem Zaisha, passionate and fulfilling :)

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you ;)))!
Nice write... deep words in this tale of struggle and questions in life. I enjoyed your descriptions and thoughts... many of the same thoughts I have :)

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

thanks ;)!!!!
This poem is so familiar to me because many times in life I felt this way. Thank for sharing it's always nice to know when people tend to fell the way you do time from time. thanks again for sharing beautiful poem.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thanks George ;).
One has to find theirself, not let someone else possibly lead them into darkness. Valentine

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

thank You ;)!!
I agree with Coyote that we all need love and a kind word now and then. I also believe that we can't always depend on others for our purpose in life. And, although it's hard to let go, a truly loving relationship shouldn't make us feel so miserable. Your poem expresses so well exactly what I've felt in dark moments, though. Outstanding write as always!

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You Jennie ;))).
I feel an inner struggle here. A lot of love but also frustration. "Lame meaningless explanations" There's a saying 'misery loves company'. But surely it would be better to find company with someone who brings you out of misery and makes you smile. Heartfelt and wonderful poem as always. Thanks for sharing Z.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You :)!!
Sometimes we live in fear, and the fear of not being able to cope1 A nicely expressed write

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You ;)!
I would say if you have to ask it's time to let go and move on....the true love will never leave you guessing!!

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You terry ;)!
I LOVED it!! It was touching yet sad, It was hopeful yet dreadful! The best part of it all, was like you are there, feeling as I do, hoping for the same...Its good to know when you read poems like these that you are not ALONE. :) Thank you.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You ;)!!!!!!!!
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Gee
Very moving,well written.Lifes ups and downs are much easier to deal with if a shoulder is there to cry on

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You :)!!!!!!

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