MY DEFINITION OF POETRY...

MY DEFINITION OF POETRY...

A Poem by zaisham9393
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acrostic poem....

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POETRY...

Pouring all your feelings

Out on a paper, a therapy for

Emotionally drained

Tears of joy or pain

Rolling down your cheeks as you paint

Your words are like a shelter from the rain.




© 2016 zaisham9393



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zaisham9393
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THANK YOU ;)

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Congratulations, and thank you for entering this piece in the contest. You well displayed your imagination and ability, by exceeding the requirements in your submission. Not only did you work the acrostic form well, you also created a message piece that flows through its imagery to a unique conclusion.
I did wonder if "a paper" would be better as simply "paper", however its a small thing, in comparison to the idea it is part of.
This work well deserved the ranking it achieved in the contest, I thank you for sharing this piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

I am so happy that you liked it.Thank you so much :)!



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You painted a lovely, realistic thought with your words. Great acrostic.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Congratulations, and thank you for entering this piece in the contest. You well displayed your imagination and ability, by exceeding the requirements in your submission. Not only did you work the acrostic form well, you also created a message piece that flows through its imagery to a unique conclusion.
I did wonder if "a paper" would be better as simply "paper", however its a small thing, in comparison to the idea it is part of.
This work well deserved the ranking it achieved in the contest, I thank you for sharing this piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

I am so happy that you liked it.Thank you so much :)!
This is a sweet and elegant acrostic. You should do more of these!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely worded.

I am not really a fan of acrostic poetry. I find it rather weak and lacking thought. However your words here do make complete sense. A fine definition of the art.

Good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

thank you :)!
Very well done zaisha... It seems like an acrostic poetry on poetry... Beautiful and very true words... Excellent thought and you delivered it on the page beautifully... Clappings...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Absolutely true no doubt about it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very Nice definition any Poetry... 👍👍👍👍👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow this is REALLY good!!

I liked this poem a lot.

Not only did you have a good flow with your rhyming,

But also I love how its a acrostic poem!

Well done
Zaisha!

Your friend
Lia

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much Lia :)
A perfect summary of what we all do, what poetry is all about. Masterpiece.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ;)!!
Very clever but true Zaisham. Well done.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ;)!!

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Hi, I am Zaisha. Well, I would start by saying that writing is one of my passions, and a way to cope with feeling overwhelmed. Also, I have been working on improving my writing skills and this woul.. more..

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