ADDICTION...

ADDICTION...

A Poem by zaisham9393


ADDICTION...


People just don’t get it…

If you are an addict

You just can’t quit

Cause it’s too late

And it’s too late to be saved

Doctors says too much is not healthy

It makes me want more

Maybe a reverse psychology

Cause…

You are irresistible

I find you Irreplaceable

And we’re Inseparable

And...

If I'm possessed

I don’t want an exorcism

It’s magical

It’s a valentine cliché…

But it still works…

No one can resist chocolate…

Sometimes you eat it secretly

Maybe not in a party

Where some say…

 ‘Oh! I am on diet…

I don’t eat chocolate’’

And…

Sometimes you need to fight…

Your appetite…

 Like…

Oh please! I am on a strict diet

And this is what happens in the end

There is a hidden box in the closet

When you can’t fight it anymore

And as you hear the footsteps

Put that wrapper in your pocket…’’

A guilty pleasure

Cause…

From a bad day to a breakup

When you need a break…

Try this remedy

Only this will be there for you

To make you feel better

Chocolate addiction…

It casts a spell on everyone

Call it a faithful friend

Or a precious treasure

Yesterday, now and forever

You will always be my guilty pleasure.

 Image result for expensive chocolate addition


© 2016 zaisham9393



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Lol... I thought this piece was much darker in the start... and I am happy to see that it spun in a cute direction! I was not prepared for anything bad today.... Thank goodness you mean chocolate... and ... AMEN... The piece had a twist which is always nice.. :)
..Misty

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much
zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it dear friend :)!!



Reviews

their can be no stronger hold on ones spirit than
the slavery to oneself - I control my own destiny
in a down ward spiral for in have a goal that I'm
destine to reach to destroy me - my hidden pain
lingers on and on for I have given my self a life sentence

Posted 9 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First I thought it was a warning piece. Then about a guy. Truth be told, I was little disappointed when I discovered the subject was chocolate. But it's sweet, so you get a pass.
You write pretty. I know it. I think you do too. Nice words also.
P.s. I really missed this.
HAppy New Year.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Lol... I thought this piece was much darker in the start... and I am happy to see that it spun in a cute direction! I was not prepared for anything bad today.... Thank goodness you mean chocolate... and ... AMEN... The piece had a twist which is always nice.. :)
..Misty

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much
zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it dear friend :)!!
A very enjoyable read for all of us chocolate addicts. I wondered at first if you were talking about love, since so many poems and songs talk about love as an addiction! :) Well done.

Posted 9 Months Ago


zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much Jennie !! I am glad you liked it :)!
Yum..... wonderful stuff :) great expression, made my mouth water !

Posted 9 Months Ago


zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

Thanks :D !
Hebe

9 Months Ago

Didn't realize i already gave a review. ...just goes to show ....it must be an addiction!! ;)
zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

Now you know :D lol!
Line 23 says: "Oh! I am on diet…" needs an "A" in it to say "Oh! I am on a diet…"
Other then that one error, This is another wonderful poem that I enjoyed. But now... I crave chocolate. 100/100 from me again, Cheers :-)
PS, my Nestle Choclate Turtles says crunch crunch... yum.

Posted 9 Months Ago


zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

thank you :)!
Love the font, the poem is playful and relatable nice write.

Posted 10 Months Ago


zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

thank you Michael :)!
Kind of a cute and funny poem in a way, but one can still sense the intensity of the addiction. At one point, I admit, I thought it was a love poem of some kind, but then I finished and said Oh, it's about chocolate. Such a girl thing. lol. Good piece.

Posted 10 Months Ago


zaisham9393

10 Months Ago

Thank you :D !
Hmm at first I thought it was gonna turn dark but then it lightens up... Like different shades of chocolate

Posted 10 Months Ago


zaisham9393

9 Months Ago

thank you :)!

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