ADDICTION...

ADDICTION...

A Poem by zaisham9393


ADDICTION...


People just don’t get it…

If you are an addict

You just can’t quit

Cause it’s too late

And it’s too late to be saved

Doctors says too much is not healthy

It makes me want more

Maybe a reverse psychology

Cause…

You are irresistible

I find you Irreplaceable

And we’re Inseparable

And...

If I'm possessed

I don’t want an exorcism

It’s magical

It’s a valentine cliché…

But it still works…

No one can resist chocolate…

Sometimes you eat it secretly

Maybe not in a party

Where some say…

 ‘Oh! I am on diet…

I don’t eat chocolate’’

And…

Sometimes you need to fight…

Your appetite…

 Like…

Oh please! I am on a strict diet

And this is what happens in the end

There is a hidden box in the closet

When you can’t fight it anymore

And as you hear the footsteps

Put that wrapper in your pocket…’’

A guilty pleasure

Cause…

From a bad day to a breakup

When you need a break…

Try this remedy

Only this will be there for you

To make you feel better

Chocolate addiction…

It casts a spell on everyone

Call it a faithful friend

Or a precious treasure

Yesterday, now and forever

You will always be my guilty pleasure.

 Image result for expensive chocolate addition


© 2016 zaisham9393



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Lol... I thought this piece was much darker in the start... and I am happy to see that it spun in a cute direction! I was not prepared for anything bad today.... Thank goodness you mean chocolate... and ... AMEN... The piece had a twist which is always nice.. :)
..Misty

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much
zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it dear friend :)!!



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I will have you know it is not an addiction, ones admiration of of the real ambrosia it all its forms is a spiritual devotion. I worship at the chocolate alter every chance I get, from hot chocolate first thing in the morning to a square of sweet dark chocolate on my pillow a night :~) Bravo! Great perspective and a inspiration for all lovers of chocolate everywhere (and FYI I am imbibing in the dark nectar as I type:~)
Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!
its sweet.... lovely... i can feel the passion..... you are blessed


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!
Thought this was pointing at something much more controversial adding greatly to the mystique and pleasent surprise this poem reveals....?

A defining chocolate treatise, I'm off for some now with my coffee. Kudos!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!
Great job. Another wonderfully crafted poem. Bravo.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!
This one made me laugh. Loved that it started out making you think this was about to be something dark, and turned out to be much more upbeat than that. Thanks for writing! The Aesthetics in this were fantastic, loved the colors.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!
Jeez, this could be used as a Chocolate ad for like Godiva or Dove or Lindt. Like, man, it made me think of every other addiction before chocolate settled into view. Very nice write, and very descriptive. Good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you :)!
even I love chocolates. Can't live without it... Thank you for addressing that in this poem.
I also loved the typography that you have used in this, the different shades in which chocolates are available are also there in your font colour.
Eat Chocolates. F**k the weight.
Cheers :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :D !
As a fellow chocoholic, I enjoyed this as much as a bite into a Dove candy. Something about the soothing brown magic concoction just makes the worries melt away. Beautifully done Zaisham.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!
I think most of us can relate to this particular addiction.
Nicely done...enjoyed this piece very much.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

thank you :)!

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