18.4.2017

18.4.2017

A Poem by zaisham9393
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A baby girl, aged three tragically died after drowning...

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On, 18.4.2017

The night she drowned

I saw a woman

Holding the tragic tot's lifeless body

I froze, not really knowing what to do

 'I heard the screams'

But no sound

The image of her beautiful face

will always be imprinted on my mind.


© 2017 zaisham9393



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zaisham9393
A baby girl, aged three tragically died after drowning...

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"The image of her beautiful face
will always be imprinted on my mind"

This is a tragic piece you penned here. Seeing someone drowning infront of your eyes, this is something I can't even imagine, but there's no denying the pain..
Heart wrenching to read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank you Yumna !
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, Zaisham.



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Vivid, tearful, painful, and heartbreaking to think about. I've seen death before, it sticks with you. Good write but terrible loss. 100/100 for the writing and the sadness this brought to me.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Great writing....this is truly heart touching.....no words to say.....
Nishabd.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Death of a child will stay with us. A sad poem written my friend.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


These images came to life in my mind with your words. A tragic, heart wrenching thing to read and even more so I would believe to witness.
This captures sorrow in the most vivid sense.
Im a very empathetic person so this was hard to read. My heart goes out to the family of this child and to you as well.
Tabby

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very sad and powerful. Keep up the work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is truly a heartbreaking and horrifying situation and you describe the event succinctly but with all the necessary emotion. Such an event is unforgettable, and I was deeply moved. Great writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


A tragic accident that touches lives and changes them. Those tragic events raise a lot of questions. Thank you for sharing your empathy...:)............

Posted 1 Year Ago


heartbreaking! well written, painful to read. I can't imagine what that must have been like for you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


very sad... it is a beautiful tragic poem...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading !
This is so sad and heart touching. It shows the situations of helplessness. Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading !
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome ☺

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