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…TO BE FREE…

A Poem by zaisham9393

 

…to be free…


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I pray to god,

Only if there is a way to stop

Trying to connect faith with hope

Every hurt leaves a lasting scar

Tracing its way to the past

 

If only the past could vanish into the thin air

Stop reliving those memories

Those broken fragments again and again

Can’t blame the demons, put an end to what's done

So, I don’t fall all the way back to step one

 

Calming the storm inside…

If I make it through this rain

Make peace with the pain

Making peace with all my demons

Trying to connect faith with hope

 

 i want to know how it feels to be free

that's what we all want to be

Let these dark stars shine bright

So, I can find my way back to blend with the Light.

 

 

 





© 2017 zaisham9393



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This reminded me of a song - "Running Up That Hill" by a magical and deep songstress, Kate Bush (later covered by Placebo). It contains the lyrics -
"...And if I only could
I'd make a deal with God
And I'd get him to swap our places..."

last two lines are killer here Zaisham -
"Let these dark stars shine bright
So, I can find my way back to blend with the Light."

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

Haven't heard any of her or any of her songs but I am happy you loved this one :)!Thank you so much .. read more



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One's journey; every soul's purpose and journey in life is to attempt to connect and blend with the light. Become ONE.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Months Ago


This is an excellent introspection on hope and life. There is no hope without faith and no faith without hope, whether you believe in a God or gods or whether you only believe in yourself. The past is who we are, the forces that shaped us, we cannot change the past, we can only prepare to face the future and hopefully avoid the same mistakes.
Good write, Zaisham.

Posted 11 Months Ago


When darkness engulfs it can seem eternal but through that darkness we find the light strangely enough for the darkness and pain are lessons and teach us strength, conviction and will...

Posted 11 Months Ago


Soft, magical and wonderful use of words my friend. I had to read twice. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


The journey is long, and yes, it is bathed in darkness, but your soul's strength rises with each step taken closer to the coming sunrise. Through the night words you leave us with a desire to go on, to dance, to one day be truly free.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I enjoyed the emotion and passion of your poem and faith is a topic of great mystery as it has a different meaning to everyone. Thank you for sharing your insights my friend Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)!
Amazing, I love how you express your emotions with words trying something new everytime.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

Thank you Najam :)!
Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺
I love it, i can empathize with this piece, it resonates with me on a deep ethereal plane of my self.

The second verse is perfect in its simple elegant truth.

The emotions you experience through memories, especially of those most recent and the oldest alike, can be tragic and melancholic in the mood it can envelope you in.

Beautifully written!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

I'm glad you found this relateable :)!
Thank you so much :)!
Amazing!! this is a masterpiece and it goes to my favorites.. thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

Thank you for this review Cara :)!!

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