A Poem by zaisham9393

parasitic relationships...

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 if you fall down

there is nothing to live for

live for the revenge, pain is worth a gain

or maybe so much more

with nothing to live for

cause’ you’re broken to the core

I have been with people like you

Long enough to know

You’re not misunderstood

You have a heart of darkness

Nice to meet you, I never liked you

So hard to say words, you know were never true

Cause, life is a hell with people like you

I still don’t understand why you had to do this to me

All I see is you and me

The flashbacks, when I look at you

Reminds me of the things you do

You’re not misunderstood

Your soul is full of darkness


How it feels, to be bitten by a snake?

Ask you; is this pain real or fake?

Watch you scream

Losing your dream

How does it feel?

To be an outcast; when you’re stabbed in the back

Does it remind you of something?

You look so kind, but there is so much in your mind

Hidden behind the veil

Your soul is full of darkness


I’m standing here, watching you dance

I’m standing here, waiting for a chance

To break you down

See you suffocate, watch you drown

Call for help, with nobody around

See what you’ll be without your lies

As I watch you break, I’ll be the first to ask you

Cause’ you’re not misunderstood

Your soul is full of darkness


Let’s begin by retracing your track

Where you left me

I’ll be standing here, watching you die

Begging for a chance

The abuser’s heart, is it made of fire?

Evoked a demon inside, against my desire

Watch me bleed, take a good long glance

Turn away, what else you expect from a coward?

You’re not misunderstood; your mistakes are flawless

Your soul is full of darkness


Remember you said, you’re stronger than ever

As I see you fall, I’ve never felt better

I have never felt this much power

Watching you suffer, soon you’ll be forgotten

My dear devil, your time here is over

There is never forever

Your mistakes are flawless

You are a master of deception

Let me teach you a lesson since I turned down your offer

I kept my secret, now watch you suffer

You thought it was over, I had my eyes on you

You were a nightmare, I'll be your worst dream come true.

© 2017 zaisham9393

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Honest and strong words shared in this poem. I liked the directness and the rawness of the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 5 Months Ago

This is brilliant
Can’t wait to read more of your work

Posted 7 Months Ago

Amazing the darkness that some people exude tends to consume all the light in others around them. Even the ones they claim they cherish so much. This just gives insight to the many horrible sides a person can have. Sometimes we have the misfortune of experiencing life with them, but we can pull out of it with the right will power and support. Excellent work and keep on writing. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago

Amazing-he’s a liar comes to rob cheat steal and kill..but has lost king ago-sometimes caught in the middle of flesh and spirit is not an easy place but the truth and light prevails, all within His will not ours...great poem really enjoyed it🌹

Posted 8 Months Ago

WWoooww! I'm speechless. You should write a book as well man. A piece like this, piece by piece. Eventually, you'd gotta become a legendary writer! AMAZING ONE! :D

Posted 1 Year Ago

An interesting piece, I would say more of a destructive symbiotic relationship than parasitic one. The raw war of egos and the dynamics of self interest bleed together, in this case both individuals end up more damaged by the interaction.
Language and structural integrity meander a bit in this piece, but perhaps that is, like the brush strokes on a canvas displaying hell, deliberate and to plan.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Speechless.. but I must say that this has been a very relatable and a very good read, its full of strong feelings and raw emotions, true messages of words unsaid and words that should be said to the ones lost in darkness or the ones who are dwelling in darkness.

Thank you for this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for this review :)!
I am happy you loved this!
Joey Nizz

1 Year Ago

Your welcome ^^
I've been out of this - poetry and such, so I rusty with all the composition and verse and whatever. So pardon me if i just go emotional...
This is dark! Beautiful? Yes. Dark also. And all of that imagery - like i could see it, smell it, slap the guy with the darkness in his soul even.
I so miss this - beautiful poetry Zaisham *applause*

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

No, this is perfect :) Thank you so much :)!

1 Year Ago

The pleasure honestly is truly mine... It was really - truly good..:)
Interesting way you versed this. Two different perspectives but both filled with pain and anger ... Love is the culprit of so much lost hope.... wonderful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :)!
A great read. Your words always impress me XD

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading :)!

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Added on September 12, 2017
Last Updated on September 12, 2017



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