CAN WE DISSECT A SOUL...?

CAN WE DISSECT A SOUL...?

A Poem by zaisham9393
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CAN WE DISSECT A SOUL...?


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 A cost of a life


Why do ignore the signs? 

It happens all the time!

 

I know you hate clichés

It gets boring to say it all every day!

 

is it on the list of things we avoid but why?

It starts and ends with, him, her, you and I!

 

14 years, he won’t have a chance to live the second time

The world listened to his story; no one cared when he was alive

 

The story of ‘acceptance’ and ‘resentment’

Could we have done anything to prevent?

 

not beaten, broken, bruised, he died

dissect whats invisible - the autopsy won't reveal the broken soul inside

 

Even if we have a chance, we can never save everyone

What if you have a chance, will you just save one?

 

I know how you feel; I know I am not the only one

I know I am not strong enough, and I am not the only one

 

no heartbeat, no memories to celebrate,

What’s left won't go away, a sip of death to live for a day

 

those who are left grieving, as the ‘meaningless love’ poured in

poured one more glass of wine, but ‘nothing’ to say

 

the blood and the pen, nothing to live for

With his last words, ‘dear world, I don’t feel your hate/love anymore’

 

Even if we have a chance, we can never save everyone

What if you have a chance, will you just save one?

 

World we live in, we give up, we give in

Who doesn’t want attention, the truth is only hidden if it's a sin?

 

Bullies are desperate; to provoke reaction, gives a little satisfaction

The people we adore most are 'nothing without our attention'


 A few words could save a life

A few words can change someone's life


The truth is, no one wants over-dramatic characters in a movie

But this is reality, so what’s wrong with embracing, '1 % empathy'

 

Just a few words to share

All you have to say is, ‘I care.’



 


© 2017 zaisham9393



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I agree my friend. A powerful and worthwhile poem.
"A few words could save a life
A few words can change someone's life"
The above line are true and needed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for the review dear friend :) !
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome my friend.



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Very good, Zaisham. The sentiment is there and one we deal with every day. It is well written, in a 'voice' that could certainly come from anyone. It tracks like a rap which it very well could be. Good write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Amen. True words with a heart of compassion behind them. I wish everyone could read these words and take them to heart. Thank you for boldly writing about a topic that needs to be spoken louder.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for this review Saruwa :)!!
It is difficult to save everyone. But if can save a life by being there just to listen that can be powerful enough for someone. Sometimes all a person is needing is for someone to hear them out whether they agree or disagree with you. At the same time, when someone does give their 2 cents it is not easy because you want to be as honest as possible yet do not want to critic them to the point where they won't want to have them come to you the next time they are needing some advice or an ear.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

It's not always that easy but I get what you are saying !
Thank you Lyan :)!
I agree my friend. A powerful and worthwhile poem.
"A few words could save a life
A few words can change someone's life"
The above line are true and needed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for the review dear friend :) !
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome my friend.
What is wrong with embracing that one percent of empathy... Stunning format... Stunning truths... Beautiful ideas... A very strong stance on some issues, and that is to be respected with writing...You laid it out very nicely... Thoughtfully penned...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for this review :)!
This is a powerful, thought-provoking flow of poetic heart and soul. I was bullied when I was younger, nearly driven to suicide for years, so the subject is a sensitive one for me, and I ache for those who suffer still. Somehow we have to find a way to change these patterns that pull so many to the edge. Thank you for sharing this piece with us.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Living under million rules to be accepted by society, now days, is not that easy as it used to be!read more
An owl on the moon

3 Weeks Ago

Life has become so heavy, this is true, the weight of the world on souls. This is where poetry gives.. read more
I have mixed reactions to this piece:

Firstly, the writing is excellent. The thought, the intent is plainly said with eloquent language.
But...suicide is something that I struggle with accepting as an option. Of course, I would say, do, act on anything I could to stop a young person from making that final step. It's just that I have a hard time believing that some people truly believe that is their only option! It is too easy to obtain a fake identity and start all over as somebody else somewhere else. I struggle with depression, but when I read really dark writing, I am grateful that I am an angry, just this side of bitter, pasty old white lady!!!! I want to yell and scream at some of the young writers: Get Mad! Slap somebody! Cuss! STAY. ALIVE.
*whew* I've been out for about 3 weeks on my bi-annual depressive episode and came back to some of the saddest s**t EVAR!
Again, the writing, the set up, all things/words are perfectly in context...I just hate the subject matter.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Month Ago

I am sorry if this upset you.I respect you and your opinon :)!Thank you for being honest :)!
I loved your choice of words in every line, so engaging.

Im really glad I got to read your work, thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Joey :)!
Joey Nizz

3 Weeks Ago

Your welcome :)
Life is short, we never know how long we have, but plenty of time to wonder "what if I said..."

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks !!!
Very warm gesture to all those who suffer bullying. I really liked this. It was a piece of concern.

Posted 1 Month Ago


zaisham9393

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you :)!
Najam Us Saher

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome☺

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