Cut so deep

Cut to deep and all you see is red, cut to much and you'll end up dead.

You cut and cut,

So deep but still all you see,

Is blood running down your skin,

You pray and pray,

For the pain to end,

But your only friend is the end,

You hope to make it through,

But in the end you join the forgotten,

The missed and the lost,

Everything you had is gone,

No one can hear your screams,

No one can feel your pain,

Your not there,

You wont to take it back again,

But now your gone,

Your cuts still remain,

The blood has stopped running through your vanes,

Your dead my friend,

The only thing is that you relieved your pain,

But to give it to your family and friends,

Do you think that's the right thing,

To give in or to give up,

The battle is never over till you say that's enough,

So don't pass the pain to those you love,

Live and fight for the life so many would dream for,

And don't become a suicide victim.

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "The blood has stopped running through your vanes,
Your dead my friend,
The only thing is that you relieved your pain,
But to give it to your family and friends,"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Rochelle]

I will continue to write and I'm glad you liked my writing, I'll ready your story as well. thanks

[Inject Positivity]

An excellent write... So many people give up without fighting without realizing what their one wrong decision could cause to their dear ones... May be life full pain and struggle but there is happiness too which is much bigger than the pain... The ending positive message was brilliant...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Dillon]

I agree with you. Powerful and meaningful poem, with a very strong ending. I liked this, it was very well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Live and fight for the life so many would dream for,
And don't become a suicide victim."
I lost two brothers to suicide. One left a infant who is wanting to know why now. Death was sweeter than life. A powerful poem with a strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote