Honey

There is much more to looks.

Sweet like honey but

she will deceive you so please

don't fall for beauty.

Author's Note

:) - Melody x

Reviews

[Tian]

A short poem, but have much depth, its really hard to express so much in so little lines, this is really nicely written :):)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

A girl in a mask can show much beauty than she who paints with bright colors, if magnifying glasses were only to cover the eyes, we would have to love from very far.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

nice.....so nicely written...

[z.chéri]

thank you!!

[Abraham George]

you are a haiku expert . for me i just wrote one and its hard to give a meaning in these three lines

so beautiful

[Priyanshi]

good one, dear...I loved the haiku...keep on writing.

[rowan.taylorrr]

I have a few suggestions, this is good but would improve if it was longer. maybe having some details on why looks are deceiving

[z.chéri]

This is a haiku so it was difficult for me to add detail. Maybe I will do a continue one in this. Thank you for your suggestion!

[rowan.taylorrr]

that's what i meant, like make a piece and go into more detail on the same subject

[Zephyr]

I agree with you.
Looks can deceive.
Short and meaningful.
Good haiku:)

[wordman]

well sometimes we just can`t help it

[Ethan]

Again, nice message. Good job :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Exactly.....Strong message very well conveyed in a haiku....I loved it.