Give our smiles

Give our smiles

A Poem by z.chéri
"

Give our happy days.

"
We should not give our
hearts; nor should we 
give our souls. For these
two are us and we seem
to be breakable.
For we tumble and cry
over stubbed toes. Why 
then hand yourself over
to another?
Because without love;
what then is the point? 

We should give our smiles;
give our happy days.

© 2018 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
:) - Melody x (cheri)

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A very sweet melody. I love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


and be positive all the time

Posted 5 Years Ago


Smiles and happy days should always come first as to give the soul to the wrong person could be fatal- our heart and soul are the depth of our being and need to be cherished and handled with care- wise words🌹

Posted 5 Years Ago


I see what you mean and it makes sense but people want love and it we don't always fall in love with the right person. There are two quotes I think apply to this poem "Don't wear your heart on your sleeve.', and the quote from Albert Einstein, "Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." We don't choose to fall in love, we don't simply wake up one day and say I will be in love with (insert name here). It is our "heart" or brain that makes that decision even if we don't want that to happen. Good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I learned something about how to be with someone and keep your identity. Too often we assimilate to what others expect. All we can really give are our actions, not what makes us ourselves. Great read!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Great questions were asked. Old Grandpa asking. "You are lucky. You have traveled, saw war and loved many woman. In old age, you will appreciate every memory." I liked this poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lovely, sweet, poignant and to the point.
Yes I love this.


Posted 5 Years Ago


I would willingly give my heart to the right person, but not my soul. That would be the kiss of death. But being generous with smiles, is fine.And I do agree with you, life without love is not the sort of life I would like. Can't think how sad it would be not to be loved by anyone. Nice little poem. long live love.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Truly said. Positive and inspiring poem to smile.

Posted 5 Years Ago


it seems the pursuit of love works both ways.
we never know which way it will turn out,
but we have to try

Posted 5 Years Ago



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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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