Fifty Shades of Greg

Just having fun with this

Her beaming smile
So overwhelming
I can only laugh as a
Thousand needles dance across my skin
Leaving me in goosebumps
Waves of warmth,
Roll genty over me
Leaving a chill
As the center of my being
Opens in anticipation
I expect a lightning strike
Any second now !
We must have run to each other
I never saw it coming
As we crashed together
In desperation
Our bodies wound to the floor
Somehow, I can no longer yield,
to this overwhelming desire
Such intense beauty,
firm in her intentions
Chaotic abandon rules
as we
Suffer to quench
Thus feeling of unquenchable passion
Now covered in sweat
And somehow breathless
I see a flash of stainless steel
As the handcuffs tumble from her purse
Her mouth watering
Is that a cat 'o nine tails
Or a fashion statement around her waist
Modern adventure, let's play

Author's Note

Fun words. That's it

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Thank you very much for writing a tasteful sexy poem that demonstrates how elusive & suggestive it can be to choose words that are more complex & multi-layered, instead of the boring genitals & juice type BS that bores me to tears. This is an awesome write about coming together in sexiness, but the twist at the end makes it also a bit fun & funny, bringing us back around to the title -- a nice piece of weaving. Maybe you could give the guys a lesson on how nicely this can be done! *smile*

[Greg Agee]

Your a doll, Thank You !

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of thoughts. I like the drive and the energy of the words. I did enjoy the wild ride in the poem. Thank you Greg for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CiNtsaLis]

*chuckles* 50 Shades of GREG; I like it ; I love it; well done; *whispers* Wonder who's the Ana Steel this time ahahaha's (:

[Emily]

Very nice story here!
Well done!

[Greg Agee]

Thanks Emily, this wss or fun. Bordering on soft porn. I had to be a little excessive. This is something I wrote months ago. All others posted are new. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. I respect the opinion of a true writer, Thanks