Good morning, son. How do you do?

Good morning, son. How do you do?

A Poem by Ron Spice
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A simple pantoum to get my feet wet.

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Good morning, son. How do you do?
'Tis a bright new day, don't you say?
The sun shows his face just for you
In a cheerfully splendid way!

'Tis a bright new day, don't you say?
I can hear those blue birds singing.
In a cheerfully splendid way,
All those church bells are a-ringing.

I can hear those blue birds singing
Right along with the mourning dove.
All those church bells are a-ringing.
What wondrous sounds come from above!

Right along with the mourning dove,
The sun shows his face just for you.
What wondrous sounds come from above!
Good morning, sun. How do you do?

© 2015 Ron Spice


Author's Note

Ron Spice
I was inspired by mattavelli's pantoum. So I decided to try one myself!

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Nice one, Ron. I had a tough time with this form. You make it look easy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ron Spice

8 Years Ago

Lol Thanks Matt! I really did enjoy yours!
mattavelli

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Ron. :)
Richard and Roland have posted pantoums as well. Theirs are better than mine.
Ron Spice

8 Years Ago

Ok I will have to check them out!

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Added on August 26, 2015
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