sleep

sleeping is FUNTASTIC

to sleep the sleep

that i happen to sleep

is a great thing to sleep

for when you sleep

my miraculous sleep

it makes you want to sleep,

we all sleep 

but to sleep my sleep 

is really hard to sleep

because it is a special sleep

i hope you sleep

just like I sleep

now go to sleep

goodnight

Author's Note

first write your review of course haha!

Reviews

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

While seeing sleep at the end of every short line can be kind of annoying, I feel like this is the point. You are conveying so much meaning through simply repeating the word. It's how I get when I haven't slept enough. All I can think is sleep over and over again. It's a fairly simple poem, but I feel there's a lot between the lines. Good job!

[MusicMartyrs]

at first glance seeing all those sleep's makes me tired..very interesting poem :)

[Jennifer Pennington]

wow....i think you need to shut down your computer, lay down, and close your eyes....because i think you're really friggin tired lmao