do you know

do you know

A Poem by zendikar
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probably not lol

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All of you people 
Know so many things
But you cant see
What matters most
In the place called earth
It isn't looks 
Nor is it brains
It cant be books
Or video games
What matters most 
You wont ever see
And that is the way
It is supposed to be

© 2010 zendikar


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zendikar
yeah... i mean it!

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This reminds me of one of the old Irish proverbs. I enjoyed it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very well structured short poem. You say a lot more than we see here in a minimal amount of time. Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


:O NOT VIDEO GAMES?! BLASPHEMY.
Really though, I love the way this came together at the end. Though I'm curious what you're referring to specifically. Love? The creator of the universe? Aliens? :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


Intriguing...I like it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so true, I love the way you said it. The only way to look at earth is to honestly look down, and most people see nothing at all. More of less it's like how the government (the smart people who know it all) take are money to (fix envirmental problems), but really just want the money well the planet still suffers...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS! You're so special!

Posted 13 Years Ago


do you have a special insight on this thing that matters most when you wrote this or are you just as clueless as us? i like it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


well done, makes me want to ask, so what, then...lol I liked this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this...its great
Great Job

Posted 13 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS!! :) simple and yet says so much:) i love this:) good jobb:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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