An Eternal Nightmare

A thousand dreams. 

A thousand deaths. 

A thousand bullets in a chest. 

A thousand wounds. 

A thousand tears. 

A pain that last a thousand years

- DD  

Reviews

[paul]

ingenious. inventive

[Pickleby Davies]

I love how this is short and simple but so meaningful! Completely captivating/mesmerizing!

[Nadi]

It sounds likea quote from some long dead, learned scholar who has seen too much pain for one lifetime.

In other words

My God, it is awesome.
That is all my brain can come up with

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Whoa!!! I might want to pay you for this one and put it in my novel as the riddle in the tomb scene...lolz...This was great!!...

[Jess Quna]

Short, strong and great!
A perfect combination,
I hope you keep at it
Greetings

Sarah

[Roxi L]

Wondering what is it??

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've engaged me completely~ this breathes almost like a riddle~ where at the end I lean closer~ mind spinning wondering "what is it!" ~ very clever~