the receiver of pain

the receiver of pain

A Poem by ZmH

blade so sharp

thoughts so thin

silver cutting into bare skin

blood flows

no one knows

fast healer

lie consealer

thought you were a true believer

then i find out your a deciever

im the receiver of pain

watch as i cut to open vein

hear me cry,

hear me scream

you cant do a thing

blade so sharp

thoughts running dull

is this the final toll

blood spews

thoughts again brew

nothing is what you shall do

for im the receiver of pain

i watch as you live in vain

blade so sharp

tears so near

what is your fear?

 

© 2009 ZmH


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I am honored to have this poem entered in my contest.
It defiantly moved by the two emotions of pain and even a lil hate. Amazing job
Thanks for entering

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amazing! This is emotion in word form. lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


great description and all, i was wincing as i read this. betrayal is just like a stab wound and you've got that figuratively and literally. even though it's quite graphic and you spelled "receiver" wrongly, it's still really good

Posted 14 Years Ago



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