666

666

A Poem by ZmH

the call of hell

the burning trenches

satans wishes

burnng corpes, fire enlightened eyes

sin spread by more then just lies

smoldering flesh

deep black ash

adreniline like no other

mother of destruction

pain the only nature

embers scorch hotter then any flame

temptation, desire part of the blame

666

the call of hell

dial the number

watch the flames swell

© 2009 ZmH


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wow. i tip my invisible hat to you. this is FIERCE!!! the imagery is vivid - though scorching might be a better adjective in this case. LOVED IT! the diction was perfect!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


A amazing job as always.The description and word choice was awesome. To be honest the flow was a lil choppy at times but you picked up very well. My favorite part is this,
666
the call of hell
dial the number
watch the flames swell

That was just an amazing part. Again amazing job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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life is full of deception and loss take it one step at a time. look to the future not the past. these are things i live by, rules i follow. my name is zoe. im 16 and i love writing. Its one of the on.. more..

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