Her

Yeah, she’s prettier than me,

But will she keep your secrets

Like I do?

 

And then I catch you looking at her,

Like she’s the best thing you could ever have.

 

When I’m right here.

 

So now she’s in a relationship,

(with someone else)

And you still can’t seem to stop.

 

Stop.

Please.

Wait.

Realise.

 

It’s me you need.

Reviews

[Chris]

did he "need" you or was it you that "needed"> An ageless question whose answer changes moment-by-moment.

There are many thoughts encapsulated with these few lines... lifetimes of wishes.

Chris

[Eagle Cruagh]

It will be interesting to see if
this plea works.
Cute poem,
cute writer.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Sunny Hostess]

This was really good. I loved the way you used the font to get the point across. Good work :)

[EMP]

i love this! right to the point without any of the waffle that i see other poets do! it's so effective with the fonts and lines, it grabs your attention straight away and i can definitely relate to this. amazinggg