Admission (Part 2)

I can't stop thinking about it,

I think I want to see her again,

I want to tell her and admit,

"I want another kiss, or ten!"

What if she doesn't feel the same?

And I make a fool of myself?

I wish that she could be my dame,

I want to feel her tender mouth.

Reviews

[NITHIN PURPLE]

is it boy to girl or girl to girl;;;

[Zoe Marie Ross]

It could be either :)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

LOL..........HA HA WITTY

[Riley Bray]

I didn't read the first part but this seemed pretty easy to understand anyway. Good job Zoe! This is a different style from what I usually read but I like it.

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you, what style do you usually prefer? :)

[Riley Bray]

Generally I read poems that are about suicide or something that strikes a psychological chord, (essentially something dark). I like the same in songs but I usually go for songs about changing. :P

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Well you should read 'To Disappear' then, as that is about suicide :)

[Riley Bray]

And so I shall. ;)