My Everything

She is the air I breathe,

And the food that I taste,

She is the scent I smell,

And the speed in my haste.

She is the touch I feel,

And the lips that I kiss,

She is the scene I see,

And the person I miss.

She is the sound I hear,

And the face that I hold,

She is the tears I cry,

And the secrets I've told.

She is the thirst I quench,

And the lunch that I host,

She is the heart I keep,

And the one I like most.

Reviews

[Acucena G.]

Looks like someone is in love, its beautiful the way you put it. Nicely pen'd

[Prritiy]

a sweet poem of love, liked it.

[RyanXIII]

lovely piece of writing you are clearly in love

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you very much :)

[Acucena G.]

its simple and beautifull.

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you very much :)

[Acucena G.]

tou are welcome

[Acucena G.]

you are welcome

[Alisha Heistand]

Very sweet piece

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you :)

[Alisha Heistand]

You're very welcome! Please spread the word about the contest :)

[Riley Bray]

Is this about your girlfriend? It seems like you really feel what you're writing about, and its very good. I liked it a whole lot. X3

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Yes, well she's my fiancee :) Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, seeing as you prefer darker poems.

[Riley Bray]

Haha that doesn't mean I don't appreciate a good love poem. :P And I was happy to review. :)