Aww...

Aww...

A Poem by Raspberry Rebel

In the early morning soomatrise
while the world was quietly dark.
A carthergenric catapillar
morphed into a wittlenark.

Beneath a silver moonbloom
a saffron wixumph watched her grow,
as the wittlenarks antriphinal
began to fiercely shimmer and glow.

The wixumph got excited,
let out a little scream,
as the wittlenark flew gracefully
to the lemon versichomy stream.

Sipping sherbert ringlets
the wixumph gasped in awe,
as the wittlenark exploded
into a million perpeucitous stars.


© 2011 Raspberry Rebel


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at first i was only reading this because your profile name is my profile name so i wanted to see if you were any good and yeah you are

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, a delightful fantasy poem with great humour, it reminded me of a cross between "Jabberwocky" and Dr Seuss' "The Lorax"! Love it. Annie :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well done! Those nonword bank contests are always so fun! Keep on penning!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh I love the non word bank entry for GotLilts contest mine is here too lol Cardboard courtyard, I loved those contests and I love your sweet poem about these two adorable characters, awww indeed. keep em' coming C.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 19, 2011
Last Updated on June 19, 2011
Tags: Fantasy, Fun

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Raspberry Rebel
Raspberry Rebel

Liverpool, Netherley, United Kingdom



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