Mariah

Posted 16 Years Ago

Posted 16 Years Ago

hope all is well

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hey, girl, Ijust subscribed to your writing...looking forward to more good stuff. Wanted to give you a heads-up; Crystal-ELisa and I are putting togather a compliled book of Erotica, to have sent to my publisher by 9/01/07...you can submit your work via THE GOOD LITTLE BAD GIRLS group, okay! Would love your work in the book!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Dear P***y:
I, the Penis, hereby request a raise in salary for the following reasons:
I do physical labor.
I work in great depths.
I plunge head first into everything I do.
I do not get weekends or holidays off.
I work in a damp environment.
I work in a dark workplace that has poor ventilation.
I work in high temperatures.
My work exposes me to contagious diseases.
Sincerely,
The Penis

Dear Penis,
After assessing your request and considering the arguments you have
raised, the administration rejects your request for the following reasons:
1)You do not work eight hours straight.
2)You fall asleep after brief work periods.
3)You do not always follow the orders of the management team.
4)You do not stay in your designated area and are often seen visiting other locations.
5)You do not take initiative.
6)You need to be pressured and stimulated in order to start working.
7)You leave the workplace rather messy at the end of your shift.
8)You don't always observe necessary safety regulations, such as wearing the correct protective clothing.
9)You will retire well before you are 65.
10)You are unable to work double shifts.
11)You sometimes leave your designated work area before you have completed your assigned task.
12)You spit at your customers.
And if that were not enough, you are constantly seen entering and exiting the workplace carrying two suspicious looking bags.
Sincerely,
The P***y.
PASS THIS TO ANOTHER GIRL!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hi Mariah,

Thank you for stopping by to read my work......very kind that u read all three chapters.......i wish i could edit...i wouldnt know how to go about it....maybe in the future :-).....to me its just a hobby, which started here....but i am very touched by ur words and input.....i will take it into consideration.......i also live in a country where English is not spoken...so i cant get help...:-P

x,
O!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by to read "The Hormone House." You really gave me some good food for thought. Appreciate your honesty, Mariah! I love your Bio. "I really want feedback on my submissions, so hurt my feelings. I want to improve, not make buddies." That is good. :) I told a guy on here something similar.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Yeah, it's one of the seven chapters in my book I have to get revised, I'm just not sure yet where it need sto be smoothed out... so thank you for what you wrote!! And yeah, I feel sorry for women who don't know what they are missing. i love men, I really thank God for them. Men are, without-a-doubt, God's most fucked-up creation! N

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thank you. Thank you very much. It is actually my first attempt at the genre and I was VERY self-concious of each word. I didn't want to use any dirty words, mostly because I was raised to be embaressed by them, but they just don't have any class and I wanted this story to really portray my feelings in the memory. Because it was a preservation of something precious to me. An immortalization of sorts.
Most of my repetativeness was intentional... usually is when I write. The only thing I never MEAN to do is rhyme on the occassions when a rhyme actually slips into my stories. But when I am repetative it is to make a contant point. A signiture of my work.
I look forward to knowing what you think of the rest of my work... if you want to know what happens later in the character's stories then read 'Don't Leave Me'... or 'I'll Do Anything', because they are both different endings to the two characters.
'Ghost Girl' is my pride and joy, I have been working on it for three years now and still something feels missing.
And all of my poetry... I don't think before writing any of it... I just let my fingers fly when I feel inspired and they just come out.
Again, thank you.
I will try to return the favor by reading some of your work as well. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hello Mariah, thanks for reading MY VOICE. You are free to rearrange the words, show me.
ciao, lara

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks for the reviews, Mariah... You are very insightful and intelligent.