Nevada Smith

I am an aspiring fantasy author working on a complete revision of a novel I self-published when I was 15 years old. Recently I began doing some editing on my rough draft, and am inserting some new chapters in the middle of my novel (which is about 220 pages at the moment). Chapter 3 and 4 are two of those new chapters, and will be on the way as soon as I finish it to my satisfaction. I hope everyone will enjoy reading Seeds of Desolation, as writing it has been a truly pleasurable storytelling experience.
Comments and critiques are welcome. I'm here to know what those besides my friends and family think of my hard work.