Butterfly

Posted 12 Years Ago

Dear Butterfly,

Welcome to writers cafe and thank you for reviewing my poetry,
would you kindly elaborate your review "try again" correct me if I'm wrong but as a poet you are supposed to be more expressive (assuming you are one).

On the other hand one for your reviews was a bit inappropriate, I admire harsh and honest reviews but yours was a bit rude and forced, you sounded like a Grammar teacher more than a critique.

With all do respect, I'd like you to notice that your reviews were not constructive at all, and somehow I find them offensive, I haven't got the chance to read all of your work, but I don't find a poetic sense in it Starting with Unspoken Of and Sick; which sounded like childish pornography and since you are new to writers cafe I don't think you have the right to write such aggressive reviews without having strong argument to stand upon.

I hope you got my message clearly, I have been a member of this community for many years now, and never had such reviews until this day, please do not take this in a negative way, I really appreciate honesty if it's supported by facts and presented well.

Looking forward to read constrictive reviews by your esteemed self,
Best Regards,
Mohammad.

Posted 12 Years Ago

butterfly,

Allow me to be the first to welcome you aboard on the journey of Writers Cafe'. This is a wonderful place to obtain opinions and grow in your writing - as long as you stay clear of the drama that dwells inside electronic lives.

I noticed you have a limited friends list, if I may offer you a bit of advice... In order to get profitable opinions and diverse feedback you may need to add alot of friends to your list.

The system of this place (most people do not even realize) is so: Your new writing is placed on the new writing list and gets pushed down the list with every new write published here. Soon, your writing is so far down the list, it becomes unnoticed and people do not click very often on those.

If, however, you have many "friends" you will have people coming to check your new works out and notice your writing... perhaps click on them and read - if it tickles their fancy, they will review. So, the way to add friends is to go about reading peoples work, reviewing them and then adding them to friends if they are interesting to you.

Many times we cheat and go on just adding people randomly, this is a common practice and is okay - sometimes. You will have those that disprove of your tactics and will come back with a nasty message or something, these are just people who live for drama.

As with any social circle (human circles NOT omitted), there tends to be rumors, affairs, rumors about affairs, stalking, intimidation, distasteful criticism and many other things that is inappropriate.

So long as you can stick to the projected goal of becoming a writer not a victim of amateur predators you will get the best out of the site.

Enjoy your time here, and feel free to message me anytime.

Great to make your acquaintance,

Legacy