Scenery Part 1

A Lesson by Luna Azul

To help your description of the surroundings

First things first, be sure to use plenty of adjectives. Please, be sure not repeat words so often, it doesn't sound or look right. For example, 'The blue sky stretched over the blue water'. To make that better you add more adjectives with more variety. So the revised sentence will be, 'The sparkling, blue sky seemed to stretch endlessly over the inky vastness of the water'. So tell me, which sounds better? It really shouldn't be a contest at all. So that is the first part to describibg scenery.