Natural Dialog

Natural Dialog

A Lesson by ericdeben
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Critique #1: Dialog > Your dialog isn't natural.

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Editing With Constructive Criticism


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I'm 15 years old and I'm an aspiring filmmaker. When you review my writing, don't just shower me with praise; I can use all the constructive criticism I can get. I'll be taking creative writing class..
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