Bad A*s Poets Talking S**t Forum the begining of haiuku/senryu

so! i started it.

*drum roll please*



DEATH. macabre. life-less. gone. missing. vacant. hollow. SHELL.
now comes the fun part - figuring out who goes next.
for now, let's do it in order of people who posted replies to the forum?
after that, anyone who wants in can put their name down
we'll go by order of the forum
that makes the most sense - right?

so! if going by order of the forums, HERE IS THE LIST OF FOLLOWUPS:
-angel marie antoinette (angel)
-yira simone (phoenix2020)
-jamee m hall (jamee)
-ben umstead (ben umstead)
-ilene m.w. lush (ilenelush)
-mona bethke (mona bethke)

i also think angels brotherneeds in :D

i'll PM each of the above with the list, with the link, and with the message.

ONE RULE -
YOU CANNOT WRITE UNTIL IT'S YOUR TURN.
the whole point is that there are different voices, working in harmony.
to have harmony, there must be SOME order.
and i think the best way to have that, is to just wait it out until it's your turn in the poem.
even tho you might have a really great responseto the haiku/senryu that came before you.... you gotta wait dudes.

AH! and i also forgot to add -

since it's taken me so long to get this up, if you want OUT, let me KNOW , so i can revise the list, so people can bump up and get their asses moving.

yes!

I finished my part...
yay... (sorry for holding y'all up)

Quietus thy soul
whispered requiem hands fold
blood dried lips still warm

(my part to save you time)