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Ok here's the example:

16 Years Ago


Disclaimer:

THIS IS AND CAN BECOME GRAFFIC MATERIAL...NOW THAT YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED LETS CONTINUE

Ok this is a poem that my friend -Kas- wrote:

"A Friend With Benefits"
 
It's a crying shame
These tears of pain?
Shallow stains
Barely knew her name
Touched me deep
In the place I sleep
From late night creeps
To this day I weep
Tried not to fall
Away and all
Had withdrawals
From missed booty calls
Recall I do
Just for a few
Pleasures we'd pursue
Those things we would do
Only memories left
Of panting breaths
Her inner depths
And panty thefts
But everything ends
Like passing trends
So I pretend
She's not missed� my "beneficial" friend
 
-KAS-
 
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here's what I wrote:
 
"My Tenacious Friend"
 
Barely knew him
But he pleased me so deeply
In my place of peace
From late night creeping
To this day of reaping
Tried not to care
But how could I dare
Going thru withdrawals
From that well missed booty call
That every night I shall recall
Just for a pleasures
That�ll be o so treasured
Those things we would do
Only memories
Of our inner depths
And Trojans left
But everything ends
An a new one begins
So I pretend
He's not missed�� my "tenacious" friend
 
 
THIS IS THE BASIC GUIDELINE TO HOW THIS WORKS. THE DIRECTION YOU WANT TO TAKE IS UP TO YOU! YOU CAN RE-WRITE IT :
 
FROM A GIRLS POINT OF VIEW TO A GUYS OR VICE VERSA
YOU CAN BASH IT OR SWEETEN IT UP
MAKE IT COMEDIC, HORRIFIC, SCIENTIFIC...SO ON, SO FORTH
 
HOWEVER YOU WANT TO TAKE IT GO WITH IT ........
 
I reference "Weird Al" Yankovic because he make and art out of remixes and if you google him or know of him you'll understand what I mean