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Hello all, thought I'd gatecrash the party.

8 Years Ago


  I have had a few views on my novel, Forever Shall Pass, but they all stop at a chapter 6, which is a long one, and no more views after that. I was wondering if it's the fact that it is in present tense and no good, or is it because there aren't many chapters posted. If it's the second reason, I will gladly post the rest of what I have, it works out to about another 15 to 20 chapters. Would love feedback, I will say that I am reluctant to change to past tense, I recently rewrote a few chapters and did not like it at all. Any feedback is appreciated and I will review in kind, may not be right away but I will.  Tammy.