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Feedback please?

8 Years Ago

Hey guys, I've just finished my extension 2 English story and I would like to publish, but I'm not entirely confident in its quality and stuff like that. If anybody would be willing to maybe give it a read and maybe even give feedback, it would be greatly appreciated. It is posted in my writing. Thanks all :)