I'm Under 18 Years Old, I'm A Writer, And I'm Proud. Forum Please read The bloodmoon pact

The Bloodmoon pact is a work in progress and is part of and title for my first book in my series that im writing. throughout the story characters will come and go and each book starts with a new protagonist and antagonist. but those who survived the last story are in that one. it's genre is a sci-fi fantasy storyline. open to criticism and ideas. feel free to send what you want