Inspired Insomniacs : Forum : Disabled-poem feedback please


Disabled-poem feedback please

16 Years Ago


I dream awake in sleepless nights.

Thoughts haunting my busy mind,

Love too stubborn to confess,

Closing my eyes and seeing only one face,

The one that so deeply haunts my pounding heart,

Have we lost balance,

Pushed over the edge,

Fell with no arms to reach one another,

No grasp to hold onto what we can't control,

Will I meet you at the end,

Will you grasp my hand,

Silence is ironically all we speak,

I cannot shout it to you,

Honesty makes the heart grow fonder,

I never asked for your absence,

I only asked for the truth,

But your truth is blind and deaf,

Disabled by your fear,

When will you release your heart,

Will you makr yourself a moblie.

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16 Years Ago


I thought this was really very pretty.

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16 Years Ago


Truly nicely done.  I'm sure most of us, especially in this group, can find parellels in our own life.

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16 Years Ago


This was really very nice and seems to fit the theme of the group.

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16 Years Ago


i really liked this! my favorite has to be the first couple lines