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 Hey. So I was wondering if one of you guys could check out my prologue. You can find it under "The Beginning of the Blood Wars" it's just called "The Prologue". So yeah, if you could read that and tell me what you think that would be great. Also, after you read it you can post the title of something you would like me to read and I will definitely check it out and tell you what I think.