Novelist's Desk Forum First chapter of my noir novel..

Hi, I'm new here. I've written quite a lot, but have done so mostly in the dark. So I thought this would be a great place to get some exposure. I have posted the first chapter of my novel PREEMPTION on here and would be interested to see what you think. Thanks! Here's the tag line: A novel about a college student whose friendships, loves, and youthful frivolities decay into a world of betrayal and murder after his roommate is killed in a campus bombing