Novelists Forum Hello :)

I am Xerclipse, and I have been inactive for the last few months. I do want to get back on this site with a book I have been writing. So far I have posted the first chapter by the time I made this. Do you have any advice for this book. If so can you please leave a review for the first chapter at least. If you have anything you want me to review then you can tell me and I will do so for you.